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A Good Boy
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A Good Boy |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia 
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A Good Boy There's truth in the obvious I'm seeing through the snow covered hills With my frozen reflection without the sun behind my back I'm eye to eye with solid faith that I'm forgotten But, a perfect image to remind me what I lack... Undying yet weakening courage hangs on for dear life And, unsheltered clings tenaciously to an honest rage So, I move on in this white land full of memories And, sigh to the new road and the turning of the page... I stroll ahead but always the urge to look behind Sometimes a glance at what once was is all I need But, the path becomes steeper on my journey to alone And, I sure wish I had a good boy to miss me... Nothing conscious about the footsteps I'm imbedding Uncertain of where I'm going out in this place Scary lights the darkness my heart is holding onto And, I just close my eyes in fear and stretch the pace... I never knew lonely like this until it spoke my name And, until it's echo screamed from the evergreens It's unmistakable sorrow that the sky produced Thinking I sure wish I had a good boy to want me... Nothing still about this moment here at all Nothing soft about the grounds should I fall Slight hesitation resides within the sweet breeze And, I sure wish I had a good boy to love me... Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
i'm sure with writes as this it wont be long,  this is very loving writeA thought from a stranger is cherished, |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
I never knew lonely like this until it spoke my name And, until it's echo screamed from the evergreens It's unmistakable sorrow that the sky produced Thinking I sure wish I had a good boy to want me... Nothing still about this moment here at all Nothing soft about the grounds should I fall Slight hesitation resides within the sweet breeze And, I sure wish I had a good boy to love me... ====================== you and me both.... damn this is a bittersweet beautiful write that hit me hard tonite. Well done poetess Saunni, as always your rhymes are impressive. I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality. |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
"Nothing still about this moment here at all Nothing soft about the grounds should I fall" ...says it all. Wonderful. Thank you for sharing it. |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (big huggssssssss) Oh Saunni, such wistfulness fills your words, I know this feeling as I long for a girl to love as I have never gotten to hold a girls hand or have a decent conversation with one! (sigh) I send angel hugs your way, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Saunni, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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