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SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown

0 posted 2003-05-21 10:48 AM



To Share
~ By Sue ~

Here I am some years later
With feelings of being outdone
Just a girl with a heart
And my life is not yet done

The hope I have inside of me
I always try to share
If only to let someone know
How much I really care

And when it comes to faith
I hang on to all that I have
With all the troubles that do come
I think surely they will pass

I watch the sun as it goes down
Tomorrow is a brand new day
In my mind I tell myself
Something good may come my way

5-20-03



© Copyright 2003 Sue Graves - All Rights Reserved
KristieSue
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1 posted 2003-05-21 10:52 AM


In my mind I tell myself
Something good may come my way
~~~~~~~~~~~~~

When you give the greatest give you can (yourself), good is sure to come your way!

beautiful poem!!!

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

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2 posted 2003-05-21 10:55 AM


I watch the sun as it goes down
Tomorrow is a brand new day
In my mind I tell myself
Something good may come my way


Sweet Sue, what a beautiful poem of faith this is!!
I know that you love tulips, so here is
a bouquet for you to enjoy.



Heart hugs to you, dear friend    
Ethel


[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-21-2003 10:57 AM).]

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-05-21 11:45 AM


By gosh, you've found the secret to true happiness!--and you deserve it, Sweet Sue!
You are such a joy to behold!


Linda

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5 posted 2003-05-21 11:55 AM


Indeed Sue..something good is going to come your way!
You're doing just great girl and I'm so proud of you.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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6 posted 2003-05-21 01:12 PM


keep that faith!
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7 posted 2003-05-21 01:17 PM


Well I can't say whether something good will come your way but something good just came my way... your beautiful poem!
ThisDiamond
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8 posted 2003-05-21 02:08 PM


Such a positive glow shines of the cheeks of this write. So happy to hear your smiling heart. TD
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9 posted 2003-05-21 02:13 PM


nice read
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10 posted 2003-05-21 03:18 PM


Right on! A grand discovery for sure.
Oh the power of the mind. Good read.
SG

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