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vandana
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0 posted 2003-05-21 10:17 AM



Dark clouds roll by
Iam standIng
Here all alone
WIth you
Thunder breaks In
The rain comes
Your words are unspoken
And my heart Is broken
Because you are giving
All the love to me
It Is raining and
Pouring down
on us
My tears is falling
down on my checks
you wipe them
With your fingertips
It is pouring rain
Now
You have taken my pain
And sorrow away
As you comfort me
With your love
My heart sings away
With the joy and happiness
I thank God
for the rain
he has given to us
I thank God again
I thank God
I have found you
It is still pouring
down on you
pouring rain

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Seymour Tabin
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1 posted 2003-05-21 11:17 AM


vandana
That's one time the rain was not a pain.

Nan
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2 posted 2003-05-21 11:38 AM


Rain can surely be a wonderful thing - Such as you've described here, vandana...
Earth Angel
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3 posted 2003-05-21 11:46 AM


The beauty of the rain expressed through the beauty of your words...  

Lovin' hugs,
Linda

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4 posted 2003-05-21 12:18 PM


I would never want for an umbrella my friend. . .

great work. . .

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5 posted 2003-05-21 12:48 PM


beautiful write!
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6 posted 2003-05-21 12:53 PM




(smiles) Yay!!! And may every day of your life always bring downpours of joy, sweet friend, yay, you're singing in the rain, singing in the rain, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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