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HopeS
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0 posted 2003-05-21 07:14 AM



My Heart Grew Fonder

Did I annoy and irritate
Pestering obsessively
Then I must apologise
For writing consistently

The penning of feelings
My hearts confession
That someone special
Became my obsession

Attempting to reach you
The only way I know
By writing you poems
With a continuous flow

As my heart grew fonder
The more I would write
My depths of devotion
Are spread with delight

Forevemore on my mind
You shall always be
I hope you understand
By accepting my apology

Hope ©2003

© Copyright 2003 HopeS - All Rights Reserved
garysgirl
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1 posted 2003-05-21 07:24 AM


Hope, you know that this hopeless romantic loves this,
and I definitely believe that he loves your romantic
poems to him, too. I know that my Honey-Love loves mine,
and I'll bet yours loves yours loves yours, too.  
Hugs,
Ethel

Seymour Tabin
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2 posted 2003-05-21 07:28 AM


HopeS
Beauty is where beauty lives, very nice.

HopeS
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3 posted 2003-05-21 09:28 AM


thanks Ethel , yes I am an hopeless romantic , but he as seen both my happy and sad sides since writing
Hope

HopeS
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4 posted 2003-05-21 09:30 AM


Thank you Seymour , yes beuaty is in the eye
of the beholder , so I hope he can see what I see

Hope

BluesSerenade
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5 posted 2003-05-22 10:57 PM


For every obsession there is someone who feeds it....wether they mean to or not.

Don't you ever apologize Hope,
it's what makes for good poetry~

And you write so darn well~

Mistletoe Angel
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6 posted 2003-05-22 11:28 PM




(smiles) There's never no need to apologize for that, sweet friend, I would be speaking for every poet when I say we all always write and we do so to breathe, to live, and it is what helps make life colorful! (kiss on cheek) God Bless You, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Hope, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Saunni
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7 posted 2003-05-22 11:36 PM


HopeS, your writings are wonderful. Remember to be true to yourself even if you write sad along with happy. Whatever be the emotion, it is just that, an emotion. All which will pass. But, never put a time limit on it. Stay loyal to you in whatever you may feel when you feel it. It's never wrong. Beautiful write.

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-05-23 04:48 AM


I have to echo the above comments...good writing here Hope
Patricia
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9 posted 2003-05-23 07:50 AM


This is wonderful.  It is funny how when you write one poem, the flood gate opens and several others follow.  It becomes an addiction as Sunshine said to me yesterday.  We write because we must.  Never apologize for that because it is part of you, the way you are meant to be.  

I have a friend who says I should be focusing on other things in my life rather than poetry.  He does not understand if I didn't write, I could not focus at all.

So, let it go.  Write!

-Patricia  

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