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Open Poetry #26

Shared Thoughts Part 2

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-05-20 08:15 PM

Shared Thoughts Part 1

Do thoughts, from a stranger mean
more, then thoughts from a friend.
because you don't have to return
a thought to a stranger, as you do
to a friend, if this being true then
a thought from a stranger is worth
twice as much as a thought from
a friend, because you had to share
the thought with your friend and
stranger you did not.

Shared Thoughts Part 2

Should a stranger give you
their thought and go on
their way.

Leaving you no say in return
you will have to carry the
thought alone.

Should a friend exchange and
share a thought with you.

It can be shared by both forever
as~ friendship~~love~~ or both.

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

Dragon Mistress
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since 2002-08-26

Posts 289
Washington, USA.

1 posted 2003-05-20 09:31 PM

Quite thought provoking. Hmm.
Tanya

~*~I'm only a dreamer, with broken dreams, and only words to fall back on~*~

Musicmaker1969

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since 2000-06-25

Posts 589
Peterborough, Ontario Canada

2 posted 2003-05-20 10:04 PM

Lovely poem. It really made me think.

Jesus lives in my heart!
Sheri Liegh Welna
(formerly Sheri Liegh Adams)
sheriliegh@reddens.ca

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02

Posts 9655
New York

3 posted 2003-05-21 09:40 PM

Q: at first I thought I was doing word problems in Math class . . .

If a friend leaves you with a thought and the thought is ten feet high then how much does Jimmy weigh? lmao

This is insightful
nice job
xxoo

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18

Posts 3756
U.S.A.

4 posted 2003-05-21 09:45 PM

lol

litlwing

whiskey

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since 1999-12-28

Posts 1278
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5 posted 2003-05-22 01:45 AM

Very thought provoking

Dont know the answers though

I wanted to tell you the answer to my riddle seeing as you took time out to read it,The sign up top is the symbol for I love you.

Julie

lost_star
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since 2003-03-15

Posts 114
NY, U.S.A

6 posted 2003-05-22 01:49 AM

great poems make you sit and wonder, :-)

passing shadows
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7 posted 2003-05-22 03:54 AM

cool pieces

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