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nobody
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since 2003-05-19
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0 posted 2003-05-20 04:50 PM



he grabbed me,raped me,left me for dead
yet you found me,cared for me,put me to bed
you didnt leave,desert or betray me
you were there and let the story be

the nightmares where i woke up screaming
you held me tight knowing i was reliving
the hurt i had felt,the pain inside
as i realised i couldnt escape,or hide....

the life he had caused,it made things worse
they were so kind but please fetch the nurse
he disrupted my life,and ruined my love
i wont do anything come to push and shove

but you were there you never left or went
it didnt matter how much money was spent
you made me happy,let me live
and gave me all that you could give

but now i have won,i can give back
and u gave me that gift i started to lack
the love for person,a gentle touch
and all for you,the person i love so much
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JingleBear
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since 2003-05-08
Posts 76
Pennsylvania, USA
1 posted 2003-05-20 05:04 PM


Very nice and touching! The one you speak of should be very happy.
Seymour Tabin
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since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720
Tamarac Fla
2 posted 2003-05-20 05:52 PM


nobody
Well aren't you somebody. A wonderful write, enjoyed.

JilGirl
Member
since 2003-05-24
Posts 364
Washington
3 posted 2003-05-25 06:30 AM


Sadness left behind is where it belongs. New life, new love in the present, with hope for the future. Quite an accomplishment!
Blessings to you!

Till oceans cease to flow and deserts lose their sands, may beauty surround you every day and wealth be in your hands.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
4 posted 2003-05-25 01:12 PM


i'm with you in heart
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