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SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

0 posted 2003-05-20 04:33 PM

Listen

And the rain
         stopped
The trees were still
clouds
took their leave

listen, he said
be still
   close your eyes
do not let the sounds
    of the pavement
           fool you

they are there
           calling each other
no noise
will shut them out
      nature's calling

suddenly,
the sun came out
           the birds fluttered
and the chipmunks scurried
    across the grass

Do not move, he said
            as his lips
     favored her ear
hush,
   he whispered
   I love you...

Ceinwyn
Member Elite

since 2000-07-09

Posts 2175
VA

1 posted 2003-05-20 04:35 PM

*sigh* definately whispering to me...lovely..I love a soft breeze and the rain..so soothing and romantic..as this is...

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-20-2003 04:36 PM).]

Janet Marie
Member Laureate

since 2000-01-22

Posts 18554

2 posted 2003-05-20 04:37 PM

listen, he said
be still
   close your eyes
do not let the sounds
    of the pavement
           fool you

they are there
           calling each other
no noise
will shut them out
      nature's calling

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this reads feather light...like a whisper on the wind..
love the surreal and romantic essence.
So good to see your name here again SG.

I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality.
MLK

JingleBear
Member

since 2003-05-08

Posts 76
Pennsylvania, USA

3 posted 2003-05-20 05:09 PM

This is so beautiful!

Earth Angel
Member Empyrean

since 2002-08-27

Posts 40215
Realms of Light

4 posted 2003-05-20 05:18 PM

SG ~

I listened to the sounds--and they were divine! Simply golden...

Loving hugs,
EA

Ratleader

Member Rara Avis

since 2003-01-23

Posts 7026
Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass

5 posted 2003-05-20 10:39 PM

Well done...well done. You perfectly captured that moment and brought us into it. Thank you for that.

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Mistletoe Angel

Member Empyrean

since 2000-12-17

Posts 32816
Portland, Oregon

6 posted 2003-05-20 10:48 PM

(smiles) Oh Electra, this is beautiful, sweet friend, you always write so beautifully and I am so happy you're back! (kiss on cheek) Keep singing with the orioles, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Electra, thank you for sharing!

May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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