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zenny
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0 posted 2003-05-20 03:27 PM



Two eyes in a young world
catch the arousal of life
Alike flowers, yet unfurled
with scents of brightness, ever rife

Twinkling stars make blue eyes green
Amazed of beauty never yet seen
Exploring the world at times patient cue
Expressing the view those new eyes show you

Cherish this world you now got to see
The one where eagles belong to fly free
'Cause somewhere out there darkness rules tide
But here you'll be safe, here you can hide


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Ceinwyn
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1 posted 2003-05-20 03:29 PM




enjoyed  


If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-20-2003 03:30 PM).]

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Georgia
2 posted 2003-05-20 04:41 PM


nice
SimplyGold
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3 posted 2003-05-20 04:43 PM


Enjoyed!
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Tim
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4 posted 2003-06-07 06:14 PM


Nicely written, enjoyed.
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5 posted 2003-06-08 04:56 AM


nice write
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