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Brad Majors
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0 posted 2003-05-20 02:09 PM



What a convient god to worship
a benevolent one
telling us
what to eat and drink
devulging ancient mystery
all in one sitting
kneeling before him every night
when we disagree with
words of wisdom
change them with a click
when tired of his ranting
turn him off
and go to bed

© Copyright 2003 Dan Mauro - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-20 02:13 PM


convenient indeed. Nice
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2 posted 2003-05-20 02:31 PM


If only i could afford a widescreen plasma god..sigh grin Great write Brad so very true.
Brad Majors
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3 posted 2003-05-20 02:40 PM


thank you
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4 posted 2003-05-20 11:55 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Good God, and now I see cellular phones now capable of taking pictures with voices and votinjg for your favorite American Idol! (sad sigh) Well, looks like we have a handy new technique in voting for the President in 2004's election, just text-message the ballot, never again will there be Palm Beach disaster! I'm telling you, cellular phones are just the latest evil in technology and will destroy social life forever I fear, let's pray together and hope soon we won't have to hear that Verizon guy say "Can you hear me now........Good!" again, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Brad, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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5 posted 2003-05-21 12:17 PM


I never watch it myself, I come here and listen to all of you instead,  and it's always better than monday night wrestling, the oldest old movie, or the newest coke commercial. But I enjoyed your poem, always do....
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6 posted 2003-05-21 10:08 AM


A good write.  Imagine the world in a few decades when the last of the analog humans die off.
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7 posted 2003-05-21 10:30 AM


LOL Nice job

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Brad Majors
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8 posted 2003-05-21 10:53 AM


thank you
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9 posted 2003-05-21 01:09 PM


cool!
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10 posted 2003-05-21 01:14 PM


Indeed Brad, myself I have 4 such gods so I can worship from any room of the house
Very interesting poem.

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11 posted 2003-05-21 03:51 PM


Same God--different name.

Mine's a Zenith.

Enjoyed.

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12 posted 2003-05-21 04:18 PM


I like this one. Especially the ending.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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