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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA 
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there's something different about looking at a blackbird something that you don't think of when you're looking at it ----- looking at a blackbird, there's something different about when you're looking at it, something that you don't think of ----- you don't think of something different when you're looking about at a blackbird think that there's something looking at it ----- think of a blackbird about when you're looking at it that, at looking, there's something different something you don't ----- you're looking at it when you think about a blackbird of (at) something there's something different that you don't ----- think of something something different about when you're looking at (there's) a blackbird you don't think of it at ----- of when you're looking about at something there's (a blackbird) it's different at something you don't think of it ----- it's at something about it when you're looking at a blackbird different you don't think of of there's something ----- something there's about different something at (of a blackbird) you (don't) think of it's when you're looking at it ----- there's something different about looking at a blackbird something that you don't think of when you're looking at it something unique --------------------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
gee this is very interesting, i liked it very much i had to read it over again to get the true thoughts. Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
my oh my, that blackbird caught your eye and left you thinking about it, something about it, thinking differently enjoyed this one Sven [This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-20-2003 01:12 PM).] |
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2dalimit Member Elite
since 2000-02-08
Posts 2228Mississippi coast |
blackbirds to look at there’s four and twenty blackbirds blackbirds ARE different Amusing and clever. Thanks. Melton |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
Sven - h'mmmm, how many blackbirds were there flying around may I ask... Clever write... BC |
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Mistletoe Angel 
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Looks as though Wallace Stevens has been part of your reading today, yes? (big hugggsssssss) Makes you wonder if there are more than thirteen ways of looking at one, when flying one can never look the same, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sven, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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SimplyGold Senior Member
since 2002-07-10
Posts 1453 |
Sven, This was very different. Talk about thinking out of the box. Got me thinking it did. Got me think ing it did It did got me thinking Enjoyed! SG |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
thanks everyone. . . glad that you enjoyed. . . . and yes Noah. . . it was Wallace Stevens. . .good job. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
dang! good stuf! |
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