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QjQ
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0 posted 2003-05-20 10:30 AM


Shared Thoughts Part 1


Do thoughts, from a stranger mean
more, then thoughts from a friend.
because you don't have to return
a thought to a stranger, as you do
to a friend, if this being true then
a thought from a stranger is worth
twice as much as a thought from
a friend, because you had to share
the thought with your friend and
stranger you did not.



Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-20-2003 11:58 AM).]

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Sudhir Iyer
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1 posted 2003-05-20 10:33 AM




interesting write

regards
sudhir


Bill Charles
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2 posted 2003-05-20 10:41 AM


QjQ - this is an excellent write of thoughts with a lot of meaning. Very interesting write, never thought of it like this about a friend and a stranger...

BC

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3 posted 2003-05-20 01:16 PM


a stranger poses no danger...

Failure isn't failure if a lesson from it is learned ~ KS

Sunshine
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4 posted 2003-05-20 01:24 PM



Strangers
and friends...
sometimes friends
are stranger and
strangers are friendlier...

Interesting write, Glenn...

will look forward to the parts yet to come.

QjQ
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5 posted 2003-05-20 01:24 PM


thank you sudhir, bill, kristie sue and sunshine  for your reply's to this write. I will doing a part 2 later!!  

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-20-2003 01:30 PM).]

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6 posted 2003-05-20 02:40 PM


Glenn, this is a really interesting write that makes the reader ponder their thoughts. I'm also looking forward to more chapters.  

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