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martyred in a marquee by a twinned equinox
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martyred in a marquee by a twinned equinox |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium 
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trapped under rocks deep-pressed and moss-coated by years of after-shock coiling and uncoiling crawling worm-like meandering in a crater formed by showers meteorite-clad that rained to celebrate a certain love’s death: martyred in a marquee spray-painted in dark ash colours of the night with darkness as a new-found friend trading history in tales remembering the embers that flew in a brilliant dazzle just before the crash of the falling and the hit brightest are the rays of a star on its death-bed particularly blood-like red in the final act of violence to leave behind an energy-sapping hole of conceited black now, sitting with darkness bright light gives fright to these clouded eyes for, always with light walks its twin shadow and then, the looming curtains must accursedly fall to obscure the stage eclipsing the light and drape the ethereal by an eternally twinned equinox: both parts night i am [This message has been edited by Sudhir Iyer (05-20-2003 10:30 AM).] |
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Seymour Tabin Member Empyrean
since 1999-07-07
Posts 31720Tamarac Fla |
Sudhir, My condolences, LOL enjoyed the write. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
thanks a lot, my friend, Seymour... regards, sudhir |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
into every life, a new curtain must fall?? great work here my friend. . .  ------------------------------------------------------------- To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Many thanks to you Sven... Regards Sudhir |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
I like the way use use the language Jealously, I find myself hoping that English is your first language. If not, I can't imagine your poetry in your native tongue. Again, this is very nice |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
My friend, your comments warm my heart... English, by the way is not my first language, but it is a language I studied in school... but it is my first choice of language to write in... Many thanks for coming by.. regards, sudhir |
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