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Inside the Rainbow (for Duncan)
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Inside the Rainbow (for Duncan) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside 
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After the storm has passed and the sky becomes visible dissipating into the darkness. On a whim the sun moves farther south seeming to tie the clouds together lying down over the horizon. I wish you were here, inside the rainbow abosrbed in pastel shades that sprinkle in the myst. Wrapped around the dawn cradled in a gentle hush that keeps the night at bay. Pulling back the sash a blend of liquid pale tones drapes the sky in golden glow. Parting through the barriers unfelt, and ever beautiful than any clue I could give away. For the days that come what may sweeping through our dreams will take their turns into the wind and carry us along. ~*~ It's just a poem~I told you I was going to write something for you, because you're such a fun kind of guy and all. Don't read into it Duncan....but if you need a translator then I'll have to see what I can do~ But please don't make me do it.  Somehow I don't think you're as blonde as me. [This message has been edited by BluesSerenade (05-19-2003 11:40 PM).] |
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Martie
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Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...I'm not Duncan...but I thought this was lovely...and yes a bit romantic, so he just might read something sweet as you, into it.  |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This is lovely Lori... and I know Duncan will really appreciate it! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Hi Martie~ Well he had me smiling and laughing yesterday when I wanted to cry! Some people don't even realize when they are making a difference, and that is my point exactly, nothing more or less. Thanks for your nice reply Martie~ |
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garysgirl  
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
LOL Lori, I can't wait to see what Duncan does read into this beautifully romantic love poem. HaHa!! You know him. He's going to think of something to say with that green smiley face. I know one thing, he's going to love it that you took the time to write aomething for him. That's so sweet and what friends are for. Thanks for sharing thei beautifully written poem with us.  Ethel |
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Martie
Moderator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-09-21
Posts 28049California |
Lori...it's a good thing...and I sort of knew that, so just was teasing you a bit, just for fun and maybe to bring another smile. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Nancy~ Well I don't know, he did say he was clueless, so he may not get it. It's just my way of giving something back....I have to trust my instincts. Wonder what color hair he has anyway! Thanks so much sweet one~ |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
'Well he had me smiling and laughing yesterday when I wanted to cry! Some people don't even realize when they are making a difference, and that is my point exactly, nothing more or less.' Ditto.  I'll be back, think I need to walk myself, I mean the dog... |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Ethel~ You are too cute and always so sweet to me. You're right, that is what friends are for. Thanks. Martie~ I took your compliments in a good way. Thanks for the teasing. Ok Duncan~ Have a nice walk, just be sure to pick up after him. Thanks for the ditto, hey now I have a clue, by george, I think she's got it! |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Beautiful imagery, I loved this. Jason |
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Saunni Senior Member
since 2000-07-11
Posts 1777West Virginia |
Simply awesome! Just awesome! Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S |
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icebox Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 4383in the shadows |
It made me smile. Thanks! |
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Janet Marie Member Laureate
since 2000-01-22
Posts 18554 |
* the moth is TRYING to be good* but that blonde comment is gonna test all my restraints LOL  Lori...Dunc takes blonde to new heights  and about that walk...Dunc..you were right the first time  This is a lovely poem Lori...both in its inspire and intent. I wish you here, inside the rainbow abosrbed in pastel shades that sprinkle in the myst. Wrapped around the dawn cradled in a gentle hush that keeps the night at bay. Pulling back the sash a blend of liquid pale tones drapes the sky in golden glow. very cool imagery...well done!! and now...Im off to find your last post, as Dunc told me I missed an ocean poem...and that just wont do I refuse to accept that mankind is so tragically bound to the starless midnight of racism & war that the daybreak of peace can never be reality. |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Thank you Jason, I sure do appreciate you. Saunni~ So nice of you, thank you dear lady~ I'll keep you in my prayers. Oh good, thanks for sharing your smile icebox~ JM~ Uh oh, about the blonde jokes. I am not into new heights or big hair!!!! Ok, funny thing is...this all started out with his reply to my beach poem when he said, wish I was there, after that the bantering took on a life of it's own. Then, as I went back and re read this I noticed I left out a word when using that phrase. I'm telling you, without that edit feature I might never save face. Oh dang....I thank you so much for your lighthearted reply and all your kind words. |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Oh Lori, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I can omnly imagine whats within every shade of each color within the rainbow!(kiss on cheek) Only God knows, but we all have special visions to reveal, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Lori, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
Well Lori, since I'm not allowed to read anything into this (damn ), how about I just say that I too, was in need of a smile yesterday and you gave me a bunch!And again tonight, with this. Thank you. (BTW...I knew what you meant when you said I'd left myself wide open, just wanted to see if I could get you to say it. ) |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Imagination is a wonderful thing! Thank you for enjoying the shade Noah~ So we're even, wait, say what? I need to figure that green face!!! Thanks again for making a difference Duncan~ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Bluesy? (you know I dont think I can call you anything else . . . just wouldnt fit) this is achingly beautiful . . . and what a lovely and romantic display of yourself to Duncan - the both of you put a big smile on my face this morning . . . is what its all about . . . being there when needed . . . excellent display of friendship from two amazing people Yep . . . *shaking head* xxoo tweets [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-20-2003 06:03 AM).] |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
 Dunc is blonde!? |
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Duncan Member Ascendant
since 2001-08-07
Posts 5455 |
I prefer to think of it as...light-headed! |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
liked it one of your best and one of my fovarite too from you |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
*Parting through the barriers unfelt, and ever beautiful than any clue I could give away. loved these lines very touching Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
LOL at some of this thread. Bluesygal, this was such a sweet treat for our lightheaded blond buddy! |
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Sunshine
Administrator
Member Empyrean
since 1999-06-25
Posts 63354Listening to every heart |
Y'know? I'm thinking that blonde is pretty smart... |
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sweetwater Member
since 2002-12-16
Posts 178Perth |
awww... this is so sweet. Lucky, lucky you |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
I enjoyed this whole thing! |
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wranx Member Elite
since 2002-06-07
Posts 3689Moved from a shack to a barn |
Yes, this is lovely, sweet and a joy. You really are writing better and better. (and the rest of this thread ain't half bad either...lol) |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Yep, Duncan is blonde-headed and has a green face with a mouth full of teeth. Hummmm..... plus a heart of gold, too. Sounds like a really nice dude to me!!!!!!  And, you are a really nice person, too, Bluesy...... [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-21-2003 08:11 AM).] |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Thank you, Duncan!--for inspiring our dear Bluesy One to write (yet another!) wondrously delightful poem! Warm hugs and a smile,  Linda |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Are we having fun yet? you know it!!! Thanks so much all you good poet people~ |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
lovely pictures... I am wondering if I will ever see a beautiful evening sky again since the clouds have seemed to roll in to stay. btw..did Duncan "get it"? hugssss M |
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A Whisper's Caress Senior Member
since 2000-11-03
Posts 791on the horizon of a fairytale |
a gorgeous write for beautiful person |
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BluesSerenade Member Patricius
since 2001-10-23
Posts 10549By the Seaside |
Maureen~ I'm hoping he got it.... you know what they say, only his hairdresser knows for sure. Thank you for reading girl friend~ I'm counting the days~ *Big hugs* That was so nice of you AWC~ Thank you for leaving your soft whisper~ |
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