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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-05-19 09:32 PM



DUI

I am driving under the influence
of the need to help a friend.
I have no need for numbing,
it's my heart in hand I lend.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

© Copyright 2003 Wynter Bliss - All Rights Reserved
Kethry
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1 posted 2003-05-19 09:36 PM


under the influence of love? I truly do hope so.
Kethry

Here in the midst of my lonely abyss, a single joy I find...your presence in my mind.  Unknown



Magnus
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2 posted 2003-05-19 09:37 PM


Very good M.  I am happy to have such a friend that I can help from time to time.
And I am sure you feel the same...

ThisDiamond
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3 posted 2003-05-19 09:37 PM


The very best DUI that I have ever heard.
Smiles to cheer you. TD

ecrivan
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my own state
4 posted 2003-05-19 09:47 PM


enjoyed the read


QjQ
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5 posted 2003-05-19 09:54 PM


very nice thoughts and read

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

SmartChick
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On A Journey To The Unknown
6 posted 2003-05-19 10:00 PM


I would say this is a good DUI.
Martie
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7 posted 2003-05-19 11:29 PM


Maureen...good way to go directly to friendship (not jail)  
icebox
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in the shadows
8 posted 2003-05-19 11:31 PM


An excellent image.  Thank you for sharing it.
carol
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9 posted 2003-05-19 11:59 PM


nice write enjoyed

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

BluesSerenade
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10 posted 2003-05-20 01:20 AM


Beautiful you~  
That's what it takes to hold a friendship together.  

garysgirl
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11 posted 2003-05-20 01:32 AM


it's my heart in hand I lend.
Maureen, this is so beautiful
Hugs,
Ethel

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12 posted 2003-05-20 03:09 AM


hugs
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