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gemjop
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since 2002-11-18
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Pencilveinia, USA

0 posted 2003-05-19 06:08 PM



Painted white
knuckles
that rap upon your cold wood
unanswered
undecided over fear
but i feel it anyway.

Fully aware
of my leaves falling faster
your meaning withers
the days i spend hoping
upturning in their place
in memories avenue.

Roots are cut
and outstreched arms reclined
i am fallen
among beauty still standing
in awe regardless
of how my beats upon oak
cease.

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Aenimal
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1 posted 2003-05-19 11:49 PM


Great writing as usual gemma
Saunni
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2 posted 2003-05-19 11:58 PM


Gemjop, this is awesomely done! It really is! I love it so much!

Sauni:)The Only Time I See The Sun Is When I'm Within That Vanilla Breeze.The Only Time I'm One With The Sun Is When He Shelters Me From The Rain. L.S

garysgirl
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3 posted 2003-05-20 12:09 PM


Roots are cut
and outstreched arms reclined
i am fallen
among beauty still standing
in awe regardless
of how my beats upon oak
cease.


There is so much wisdom in this, Gemma.
I really do like this write.  


I sure am glad to see you here, friend.  
Hope to see you again soon.

Heart hugs to you from me  
Ethel


(did you check your e-mail?)

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-20-2003 12:10 AM).]

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
4 posted 2003-05-20 05:48 AM


Goodness gemma . . .

this one I KNOW  *shudders*
intense write here missy
darkly beautiful . . .
amazing
xxoo

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