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Midnitesun
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0 posted 2003-05-19 02:50 PM


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(brian's 'iceberg' post)


*****
I wonder what might happen
if mankind
should suddenly access
90% of his mental capacities?
(or whatever amount is left untouched
according to the scientific evidence)

Even more food for thought,
What if we as a species accessed
10% of our emotional capabilities
to love unconditionally?


****thanks Brian, for the mind/heart machinations

[This message has been edited by Midnitesun (05-19-2003 06:17 PM).]

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1 posted 2003-05-19 11:53 PM


ah yes, Kacy

I like that second part better
we all need to grow emotionally don't we?

Smiling thanks at you
I'm glad my scribbles met you halfway

and?
it occurs to me...that what people thought about this poem...is right...yes..I wasnt thinking of our brains when I wrote it..but it does make harmonize with what I was thinking....there are individual brains...there are collective brains....and then there is.....Brain

thank you for reading and writing Kacy

Aenimal
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2 posted 2003-05-20 12:11 PM


just another 1% and hollywood would finally realize that Ben Affleck has the charm and presence of wood on screen..sigh
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3 posted 2003-05-20 12:24 PM


glad you enjoyed my interpretation Brian,
and BRAIN? or is that BRIAN mispelled? LOL


Raph, LOL, poor Ben, I take it you don't care for him
Ben who?
LOL

wranx
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4 posted 2003-05-20 01:26 AM


Hmmm. I've been told that pretty much ALL of mine is somewhat "touched" (Where does that leave the 10% that remains pristine?(not much room for rolling around)lol)
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5 posted 2003-05-20 02:35 AM


and all this time? I was doing MATH.


littlewing
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6 posted 2003-05-20 05:55 AM


Kacy:

a lovely and fitting tribute indeed
beautiful write here - now the both of you have me thinking (thanks - I really dont like doing that . . .)

Kacy - the second part - completely - gave me chills it did
and Bri?  That should have read:

Brian instead of Brain . . .

the both of you   -   free spirits truly
both of these writes - they seem as if
they should be together - you know - like Bri's first - then Kacys' second - kind of like a second thought to follow the first

a duet of intense reality . . .
thank you both and Kacy?
this is beautiful
xxoo

lol @ Raph - yes - grrrrr Affleck - ssshhhh . . .

[This message has been edited by littlewing (05-20-2003 05:56 AM).]

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