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In Good Hands
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In Good Hands |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines 
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In Good Hands I have placed my heart in good hands. His softness of hold, soothes the ache of the past, warms the chill it once felt and charges my happiness, once more. As the dark settles in, he lights up my life with his smiles and eyes me as a solid find, a treasure, each day discovering another gem in me. One by one I am lifted, the failing steps behind me now, learning as we go, laughing as we make new footprints together. He tempers my soul with composure. My heart has strengthened in resolve. Its tempo an even blend, kneaded by his looks, from blue eyes that risk focusing on mine. Invigorated by each touch, I am in good hands... M "Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less." (Will Moss) [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-19-2003 01:28 PM).] |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Loved the poem. I am lucky to know hands like that. and?  love the signature too. |
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bslicker 
since 2000-12-04
Posts 2321state of mind |
Very Nice Bernie |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
hey there...I just looked away for a sec and already, there you were.  thank you, Karen hugssss M [This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-19-2003 12:59 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good afternoon Bernie, you snuck in while I wasn't looking Hope the day finds you well  M |
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garysgirl
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Maureen, I think this is my favorite of all your poems. I know I've probably said that before and will most likely say it again. LOL But the message in this is beautiful.  Besides I know exactly how this feels, too. (and I love the new photo, too) "To be in love with love is truly to love".....by Paladin ~with heart hugs from Ethel__GG~ [This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-19-2003 12:55 PM).] |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Thank you, Ethel..I am sorry I haven't been responding much but I have a lot on my plate right now. Been learning to drive a pick-up truck ( someone elses) and I think I may just want one for myself M |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Maureen: is nice to see you shining like you are meant to shine . . . I see your smile here . . . and as for pick-ups - yep . . . you will never want to drive in a car again good for you and this is just what I needed xxoo |
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Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191Cape Cod Massachusetts USA |
Feeling safe and at peace.. What a wondrous thing... Nice write, M... |
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nobody Junior Member
since 2003-05-19
Posts 43 |
so calm so lovely [This message has been edited by Nan (05-20-2003 09:14 AM).] |
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Patricia Member Elite
since 2003-04-06
Posts 2160Missouri |
To the point of trust...how wonderful. And he sees you and the gems you offer. I should say you are in good hands. This is beautiful. -Patricia |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
“As the dark settles in, he lights up my life with his smiles and eyes me as a solid find, a treasure, each day discovering another gem in me. One by one I am lifted, the failing steps behind me now, learning as we go, laughing as we make new footprints together” Nakedthoughts, this is really good, especially this second verse... I hope your happiness continues! The best of wishes to you, Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (05-20-2003 09:14 AM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
*Invigorated by each touch, I am in good hands... i liked these lines very touching. Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason. |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Very nice poem. |
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