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1slick_lady
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standing on a shadow's lace

0 posted 2003-05-19 10:53 AM



Deception

life
why is it
thou have
deceived me
my breath
still continues
when my
heart has
stopped


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Sven
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1 posted 2003-05-19 12:23 PM


this one, I'm going to keep. . .

well done helen. . .

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nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-05-19 01:26 PM


~sighing~

could never understand "deception"
well done, Helen
M

Aenimal
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3 posted 2003-05-19 01:35 PM


I know you know I love this
littlewing
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4 posted 2003-05-20 06:27 AM


Helen:

I always wondered how that was medically possible seeing as that half of us are stumbling around like this - myself included  . . .

You are on your mark *smile*
this is amazing
xxoo



Nan
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5 posted 2003-05-20 07:09 AM


And then - we take yet another (wiser) step...
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