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JamesMichael
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0 posted 2003-05-19 04:06 AM


Only A Few Really Do

The one's that start
saying that they love you
right away are really scary.

For after awhile you
start figuring out that
they are really good at saying
it but really bad at doing it.

Anyone can say
that they love you
but only a few really do.

JamesLee
May18
2003



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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-19 04:09 AM


words easy said are, "I Love You" words abused are "I'm in Love With You"

nice write!!

Poetry gives us relief, We give poetry reason.

CSKpoet
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2 posted 2003-05-19 04:13 AM


you got that right James!ONly one really fits;;;;it is finding her that is difficult to be patient for.
nice write and hugs, my friend, Cher

Poetry is:
Passion, imagination and intellect running together.

Aloha with warmest regards, Cheryl Stewart Koomoa

passing shadows
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3 posted 2003-05-19 04:40 AM


yep!
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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4 posted 2003-05-20 06:22 AM


James:

you just hammered the last nail in the coffin with this one . . .

truly amazing and insightful . . .

(Oh My God - now James is in my head too = no wonder I cant hear myself think lol)

truly amazing
I despise that I know this well
xxoo

Hockeychick19
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since 2002-10-29
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5 posted 2003-05-20 11:47 AM


James,

You're absolutely right those words are over use sometimes and because of that they may not always be true.

Nice write.

~Kelly~

icebox
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in the shadows
6 posted 2003-05-20 12:18 PM


Hmmm...so, perhaps love really IS just another four letter word....

Nice work!

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