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Joe Houck
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since 2001-04-23
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0 posted 2003-05-18 11:32 PM



Mine Alone

My hand weaves words
Into this heated blanket that I’ve sewn
Sitting pen in grasp
Until I laps
Into a coma
Crafting sylibals in succesion
Showing thoughts of mine alone
The scattering of the peasants
Scratching for the scraps the trinkle
From the beloved social crown
A tattered demonstration
Of the mastered art of down

to be continuuuud.


© Copyright 2003 Joe B. Houck - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-19 12:46 PM


sure glad you didn't lapse into a comma
LOL
oh, you're rolling now, Joe

passing shadows
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2 posted 2003-05-19 04:54 AM


cool! this just has something about it...the ending...I dunno...very cool write
Nan
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3 posted 2003-05-19 07:01 AM


Just keep on weaving, Joe...
ThisDiamond
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4 posted 2003-05-19 12:17 PM


Have noticed the unfinished thoughts you pen recently...
Have to ask you...
Where does the heart wish to fly?
...Down is never lower, than when we forget how to get up!
pssst...don't forget to get up...
TD

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