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LastMoments
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since 2003-03-07
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0 posted 2003-05-18 10:58 PM


You drown down
I hold your face to the ground
And here I shout
About the way you've treated me

I sufficate
In the pool of tears you made
Deep inside of me
I throw you in my hate

How could you be this
The person I once idlized
I can't seem to see
In the same shadows of the past

Now for every scar
That lies across my arms
Is just another time
You took me for granite

I walk myself to a moments finish
And wait until a minutes end
To see you will not ever change
To see you are lost parts of me

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SparkleeLipGloss
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since 2003-05-18
Posts 19
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1 posted 2003-05-18 11:41 PM


"Is just another time
You took me for granite"

I think you meant "granted"

Its a great write.. Very deep and well written

QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
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2 posted 2003-05-19 12:30 PM


well written thoughts.

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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3 posted 2003-05-19 04:55 AM


I KNOW what you mean! damn, this is good!
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