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ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis

since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
Michigan, USA

0 posted 2003-05-18 09:26 PM

Barely lit,
Golden fingers invade warm slumber
The print of you still glows along
The curve of me
And night has passed so quickly
In a velvet wave
That carried us to rumpled mountain tops
on flights of fantasies
She saunters as she smiles
Dawn,
The amber glimmer in a rosy glow
Gathering my breath in her palm
Handing me her energy to rise
Barely lit,
My skin still wearing scents of night rain
And you
Swathed in pleasure soaked linen
I follow quietly that scent
Down oak gleamed steps
Past smoldering embers
For my cup is filled and carried
I find the print of you
Still warm in the morning sun
As I curve into my place
Complete

Copyright Kkh 5/18/03

Magnus

Member Laureate

since 2001-10-10

Posts 14135
South Carolina, USA

1 posted 2003-05-18 10:01 PM

Holy toledo tamales.....WOW! Did ya break
out the firehose for the keyboard after you
wrote this extremely passionate and
ya ya yayayayaya........wow!

and this is about what?

[This message has been edited by Magnus (05-18-2003 10:26 PM).]

BluesSerenade
Member Patricius

since 2001-10-23

Posts 10549
By the Seaside

2 posted 2003-05-18 10:48 PM

Still warm in the morning sun
As I curve into my place

That's what I call basking in it!!

Your thoughts are a pure pleasure TD~

passing shadows
Member Empyrean

since 1999-08-26

Posts 45577
displaced

3 posted 2003-05-19 05:01 AM

ah, just beautiful!

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

4 posted 2003-05-19 05:55 AM

Nice writing...James

Richy
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 3050

5 posted 2003-05-19 06:10 AM

Man this poem was.... hang on one sec.... ahhh that’s better, I had to crack the window a bit, it was getting rather warm in here...

Where was I???

Oh yeah... TD, and some of you other ladies in here... some of the poems you have been coming up with lately are just so... Great!!!

It must be the spring air???

TD, I really liked this... a lot!

Keep ‘em coming

Please!

Thanks!

Richy

Nan

Administrator

Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

6 posted 2003-05-19 07:15 AM

...Well Done...

vandana

Member Patricius

since 1999-10-22

Posts 10463
USA

7 posted 2003-05-19 06:04 PM

enjoyed

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