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Open Poetry #26

My Heart Says Good Bye

D.Lester Young
Senior Member

since 2001-12-08

Posts 1219
Austin, Tx

0 posted 2003-05-18 04:00 PM

Every reason why my heart says,
you cannot go, I will not let you,
but my love will never imprison you.

Spirit of my heart needing you so,
the desire to leave is too important,
for you to seek your happiness.

The pain quakes in a broken heart,
in the hurt that reaches so deep,
beating from future loneliness.

From a faint heart of long ago,
the pain in you almost succumbed,
but our loving care mattered.

As our heart beats join,
we caress each others compassion,
and open the gate to your destiny.

D.Lester Young
Somewhere in America not on company time 05/18/03

[This message has been edited by D.Lester Young (05-18-2003 04:01 PM).]

icebox
Member Elite

since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

1 posted 2003-05-18 04:08 PM

Good poem.

The sharp blade cuts the cleanest.

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean

since 1999-11-16

Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA

2 posted 2003-05-18 04:18 PM

Enjoyed...James

Gentle Spirit
Member Patricius

since 2000-10-09

Posts 13989

3 posted 2003-05-18 04:35 PM

The last stanza says it all..

"As our heart beats join,
we caress each others compassion,
and open the gate to your destiny."

Very well written. Enjoyed.

SimplyGold
Senior Member

since 2002-07-10

Posts 1453

4 posted 2003-05-18 07:05 PM

Enjoyed.

SG

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