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SparkleeLipGloss
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0 posted 2003-05-18 12:54 PM



My Unnatural enemy
It cannot harm me
But I am helpless against it
It envies my happiness
But enjoys my pain

My unnatural enemy
The cause for my demise
It hungers for my pain
It wants to ruin who I am
I cannot stop it

But you see,
My unnatural enemy is no stranger
The enemy I hate is all too familiar
My unnatural enemy is my soul…
The enemy is me…

*3-12-03*


© Copyright 2003 Katie Spotswood - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-18 12:55 PM


this aches...

Welcome to Passions

Mistletoe Angel
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2 posted 2003-05-18 01:00 AM




(big hugggssssssss) This is true on a universal scale, sweet friend, we are always our worst enemy apparently, and all the while our best friend, how contradictive is that? This is a powerful debut, sweet friend, now look ahead and remain steadfast and trample the shadow, God Bless You! Welcome to Passions, sweet Katie, may you be inspired by all of us here as we will all be inspired by your lovely words! I can't wait to read more of your lovely words, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Katie, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

whiskey
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3 posted 2003-05-18 01:03 AM


Be brave and fight it. Enemies can be conformed into friends with a little time.
Welcome to passions.

Julie

SparkleeLipGloss
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4 posted 2003-05-18 01:13 AM


Thank you guys for the welcomes! (((HUGS)))
TwoHeartsOnePen
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5 posted 2003-05-18 01:29 AM


Welcome to Passions.

Love is patient, indeed. It endures the distance when it seems we cannot endure it ourselves.

Brad Majors
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6 posted 2003-05-18 02:46 AM


yes welcome good to have you here
Nan
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7 posted 2003-05-18 08:14 AM


We are indeed our own worst enemies at times - You've said this well, Sparklee - I enjoyed...

Welcome to Passions in Poetry - This is a wonderful place where you can settle in, share your work, and enjoy reading and responding to others.  I look forward to reading more of your posts...

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Sunshine
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8 posted 2003-05-18 09:10 AM


Welcome to Passions, Katie.  
Looking forward to more of your writings!

Karilea - if I whisper, will you listen?

SparkleeLipGloss
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9 posted 2003-05-18 01:39 PM


THank you guys so much! And thank you Nan for the greeting card (((HUGS)))
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