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Nightshade
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0 posted 2003-05-17 01:59 PM





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If I had to do it
All over again
Would I ?
Let you reel me in
With your smile
Allow you to tempt me
With your charms
Believe your excuses
And tall tales
Wait patiently for
Your phone call
Eagerly for your return
Become strong for you
To lean on
To depend on
If I had to do it
All over again
Would I ?

Yes.

.
.

Chris Barker
~2002~


© Copyright 2003 Chris Barker - All Rights Reserved
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1 posted 2003-05-17 02:02 PM


don't you know it...me too
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2 posted 2003-05-17 02:12 PM


lol.  Thanks passingshadows!!

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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3 posted 2003-05-17 03:38 PM



This, a beautiful poem about love.


I really like this.


Hugs Pat

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        "Desiderata"

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4 posted 2003-05-17 03:42 PM


Chris, Yep...I sure would!!!!  LOL
Heart Hugs,  
Ethel

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5 posted 2003-05-17 03:49 PM


this just tells it all!!  very loving

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

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6 posted 2003-05-17 04:10 PM




(sigh) Oh Chris, this is beautiful, sweet friend, this made me smile as so many of your beautiful words do! (kiss on cheek) I long to even feel this feeling for the first time, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Chris, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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7 posted 2003-05-17 04:52 PM


I sometimes wonder...James
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8 posted 2003-05-17 05:00 PM


Ah, an open mind and heart. Very nice questions and thoughtful writing.
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9 posted 2003-05-17 05:14 PM


There is so much joy in knowing how far love can take us and the extent that lies in our certainty~

when we just know, without a doubt..Yes!!!  

This was such a nice poem Chris~

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10 posted 2003-05-17 05:17 PM


Yeah, I know Chris...I know you would..
and so would I!
I love this...he's a lucky man!
See ya soon,   Love and hugs, Teed.

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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11 posted 2003-05-17 05:19 PM



Ah...you're back!
And you brought your muse
with you!  

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12 posted 2003-05-17 05:22 PM


Born of love...a commitment...

A vow perhaps?  Nicely done, Chris.

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13 posted 2003-05-17 05:34 PM


Well, you had me on the edge of my seat...Would she or won't she???  She would do it all over again.  That's great!  
I like this one...I like not knowing the ending until I get there.  Unpredictability is very cool!

-Patricia

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14 posted 2003-05-17 05:57 PM


Yes, again and again.

SG

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15 posted 2003-05-17 06:08 PM





I love reading your comments
You are all wonderful !!

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16 posted 2003-05-18 12:56 PM


Nightshade - Geez, I've tried to call but don't have the number, hehehe...

BC

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17 posted 2003-05-18 01:24 PM


Bill - excuses, excuses....lol. Thankyou kindly for your response.

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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