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P.R.C
Junior Member
since 2003-01-31
Posts 40
Hull, England

0 posted 2003-05-16 04:41 PM


I close my eyes
I try to hide inside my head
These feelings and fears
Sometimes make me wish I was dead

I stare at your photo
And it starts all over again
It pierces my heart like an arrow
I cannot deal with this pain

I know youre not here
And I am all alone
Somehow I can feel you near
I hate being on my own

I cannot stop these tears
Everytime I think of you
Trying to drown out my fears
This hurt, this pain is just too true

I need you now more than ever
I try forget
But it makes me unhappier
I cant believe its made me this upset

Why cant things go right
For you to be here,
Just for one night
So I can hold you near
Hold you so tight

All my fears
Would dissolve, just disappear
You would wipe away my tears
Theres so much inside of me,
That you dont hear
So much you dont see



[This message has been edited by P.R.C (05-16-2003 04:46 PM).]

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-05-16 04:47 PM


Hannah:

goodness I know this too well
it is scary - but
it does get easier to deal with
truly

Have I welcomed you?
I apologize:

Welcome to PIP!
xxoo

JamesMichael
Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
2 posted 2003-05-17 07:36 AM


Enjoyed...James
Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
3 posted 2003-05-17 07:46 AM


Breaking up - Is hard to do... Such a bittersweet tale, PRC... You've expressed the emotions of solitude well...
Rick
Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903
Victoria, Australia
4 posted 2003-05-17 08:04 AM


P.R.C, I enjoyed this write, though you sound alone, even in a crowded room we can feel this way, the heart speaks volumes, emotions take over, we question, we cry, we write and somehow it gets better. We chase the loneliness away and seek for what we dream.

May happiness come soon.

Sincerely
Rick

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