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Bill Charles
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0 posted 2003-05-16 04:21 PM


“TO KNOW MY TOUCH”
~~~~
In nights dreams of dreams,
my embrace holds you closer,
fingers touch soft as pillows melt,
and a distance great of a thousand miles,
yet my thoughts hold you for a while,
soft words to love you,
and I listen for a reply,
for sounds, one whisper,
to know my touch…
~~~~
Bill Charles

© Copyright 2003 Bill Charles - All Rights Reserved
Pilgrimage
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1 posted 2003-05-16 04:30 PM


Oh my, romance. I love this.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

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2 posted 2003-05-16 04:37 PM


enjoyed this
littlewing
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3 posted 2003-05-16 04:38 PM


Bill:

I am sure such a lovely lady
will never forget a touch such as this
is beautiful
xxoo

Enchantress
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4 posted 2003-05-16 04:44 PM


With a touch as gentle as yours Bill..
she would never ever forget you I'm sure.
This is ever so romantic, and softly sensual.
Very much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Ivy Rose
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5 posted 2003-05-17 01:26 AM


Bill...This poem is ever so gentle...just like the soft, gentle touch of a lover's lips. Very romantic...with the subtle hint of yearning in its words. ***Ivy Rose
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6 posted 2003-05-17 06:06 AM


ah!
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7 posted 2003-05-17 09:43 AM


One word for this: excellent. You captured it exactly, just the way it is for a man....for all of us, I suspect.

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8 posted 2003-05-17 09:50 AM


Bill, I have a feeling that when you are with your lady, you see that you make such beautiful memories that neither of you will  ever forget......no matter the distance in space. That's what my Honey-Love and I do....and we keep the flame burning through phone calls and letters and poetry. So how could there not be wonderful dreams when the distance is separating us physically? We are never separated in heart or spirit.

I know that you know what I mean.
Hugs,  
Ethel

[This message has been edited by garysgirl (05-17-2003 10:01 AM).]

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9 posted 2003-05-17 11:40 AM




Bill,

Your usual soft lovely write.

Enjoyed,

Hugs, Pat

..without surrender, be on good terms with all persons..
        "Desiderata"

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10 posted 2003-05-17 06:51 PM


Bill

"and a distance great of a thousand miles,
yet my thoughts hold you for a while,"

Beautiful!

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11 posted 2003-05-17 06:58 PM




(sigh) Oh Bill, this is lovely, sweet friend, I know that feeling too of just curiously wanting to know how one feels by ones love, this is magical, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Bill, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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