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Professor Gloom
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of Depression

0 posted 2003-05-16 02:05 PM


The country stand was on a country lane,
Constructed in fashion sturdy but plain,
Yet dazzle by the moment just gone by
All became fancy seen with inner eye;
Her dust had settled when I reached my car,
Time had passed and she must have driven far.

White Corvette you carried beauty away
Memories set you have lighten my day.

I drove off down paths in forest shadow
Beside fenced green fields and wandering streams,
The fragrant air swept in through my window
Slowly motored between the real and dreams.

Her eyes, smile, and voice in my thoughts did blend,
I saw her white Vette parked at the next bend.

Beside the road and beside a bridged stream,
The car was there and she had gone away,
So I parked behind it to find this dream,
Vividly real this dream in the midday.
Slowly savoring I fought not to rush
As I followed a path through the lush brush.

~~To be continued~

Gloom


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just out of reach
1 posted 2003-05-16 02:18 PM


Oooooh...I can't wait!! Enjoying this I am indeed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Brad Majors
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2 posted 2003-05-16 02:28 PM


nice
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3 posted 2003-05-16 02:31 PM


good thoughts about a vett,  i'm waiting for the rest of the story.

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Enchantress
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Canada eh.
4 posted 2003-05-16 02:33 PM


Wonderful!!
......and then???
How long must we wait?
Love this!
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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