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QjQ
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since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756
U.S.A.

0 posted 2003-05-16 01:40 PM


i LoVe YoU

I,m writingI love you on
every rain drop

Each snow flake that falls
will say I love you

The winds will whisper I
love you

It will also be written on
every grain of sand

I will teach all the birds to
sing I love you

On every petal of all the flowers
it will say I love you.

Each drop of nectar the bees
collect will say I love you with
sweetness

On every piece of chocolate
I love you will be placed

The sun and moon will cast
shadows saying I love you,
and all the stars will write
across the nite sky.

I~~~~LOVE~~~~YOU


It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

[This message has been edited by QjQ (05-16-2003 01:41 PM).]

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Jason Lyle
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since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438
With my darkling
1 posted 2003-05-16 01:43 PM


Very nice write, wish I written it for my lady.A "get lucky for sure" poem

Jason

littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
2 posted 2003-05-16 04:15 PM


nice write Glenn

ahhh so THIS is why you guys write . . .
hmmmmmmmmmmmm

lol
xxoo

Bill Charles
Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619
highways, & byways, for now
3 posted 2003-05-16 04:16 PM


QjQ - oh yes, someone has it really bad...

BC

JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
4 posted 2003-05-16 04:51 PM


Thats a lot of I Love You's...James
nakdthoughts
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since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200
Between the Lines
5 posted 2003-05-16 04:55 PM


that's the way to a romantic's heart
*s
M

Hockeychick19
Member
since 2002-10-29
Posts 430
Massachusetts, USA
6 posted 2003-05-16 08:11 PM


That's beautiful. I wish someone would write like that to me. Your lady is very lucky to have someone like you.

~Kelly~

Nan
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Member Seraphic
since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
7 posted 2003-05-16 10:14 PM


...Somebody's pretty darned lucky...

carol
Senior Member
since 2003-01-25
Posts 624
Florida USA
8 posted 2003-05-16 10:27 PM


QjQ,very beautiful this is such a nice thing to write

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

[This message has been edited by carol (05-16-2003 10:28 PM).]

teledon
Member
since 2003-03-30
Posts 51
Florida USA
9 posted 2003-05-16 10:51 PM


awright!! that's how to win a lady's
heart .. and write with enthusiasim

"keep it simple"

Justbleu
Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329
Oregon, Originally From Alaska :)
10 posted 2003-05-17 01:47 AM


What a lucky lady she is!!!!!
Beautiful!!!!
Bridgette

"Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again.  To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown


secretlife
Member
since 2002-07-30
Posts 359
Grean Earth ,,,
11 posted 2003-05-17 02:27 AM


WaaW What a sensitive words...

I will dedicate it to my love and i will say

I love u from my heart....

Thanx alot for posting this I really love...

Hugsssssss

You Are My End Secret Life...
Be Sure That I Can Be always With You...
Through The Distances...
Through Life Troubles...
Me And You Is One...

Richy
Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050

12 posted 2003-05-17 02:34 AM




That's a very sweet and loving poem QjQ

Great Job!


Richy


kaile
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since 2000-02-06
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singapore
13 posted 2003-05-17 04:14 AM


wonderfully sweet and romantic..pray tell us, how did your lady react?
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
14 posted 2003-05-17 05:30 AM


wow! just beautiful! wish someone would write something like that for me...I'm jealous
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