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bslicker
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0 posted 2003-05-16 01:17 PM



Crossroads


Thinking of you
my body still goes numb
feelings that come
deep inter-soul
knowing that you are out there
within my universe
while your within yours
finding our pathways to our future
down the different roads of directions
never crossing each others path
to become the person
we want to become
seperately traveling
through another time period
of our lives
dimensions of being
looking for more
broken can be repaired
traveling down the parallel
when pathroads cross
bringing back feelings
of the numbness threw-out
vows renewed
brought back through
intersecting paths
once again.


Bernie

A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

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passing shadows
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1 posted 2003-05-16 01:23 PM


how romantic and true...crossroads, time lines like spider webs...wonderful writing!
QjQ
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2 posted 2003-05-16 01:27 PM


nice write and thoughts

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littlewing
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3 posted 2003-05-16 01:36 PM


Bernie:

how nice that your paths should cross
again . . .
this is lovely and I do know about that
intersecting
xxoo

bslicker
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4 posted 2003-05-16 01:39 PM


Thank you
passing shadows, QjQ, and little wing for reading.
Finally starting to write from the inter me instead of just putting words on paper
i will get better at this i hope

Bernie



A smile a day keeps the world in smile's.
Bernie Slicker

[This message has been edited by bslicker (05-16-2003 01:40 PM).]

Brad Majors
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5 posted 2003-05-16 02:26 PM


pretty
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6 posted 2003-05-16 02:41 PM


Very nice Bernie...
Good to read you here again.
~Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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