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Sven
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0 posted 2003-05-16 12:57 PM


remind me
that being here is just like
being there
             only the trees are different
(birch and maple
            instead of oak and ash)
the wind moves through them
       all the same
but, somehow
       I wonder what the
             wind would sound like
if they were all
                    evergreens

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1 posted 2003-05-16 01:07 PM


Sven:

I have the feeling that the wind would
be but a soft breeze . . .
this is lovely
xxoo

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2 posted 2003-05-16 01:12 PM


sigh
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3 posted 2003-05-16 01:30 PM


Sven..I love the sound of the wind through the evergreens..
This is wonderful..I am so happy you're back!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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4 posted 2003-05-16 02:33 PM


I am not sure of the sound, but the scent would be lovely through the evergreens. Very nice Sven..enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

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5 posted 2003-05-16 04:03 PM


very thoughtful write Sven

breezes are refreshing, no matter which variety of leaves they blow through

yet each tree has a different feel, releases a different scent, evokes a different mood

enjoyed this

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6 posted 2003-05-16 04:37 PM


enjoyed
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7 posted 2003-05-16 04:42 PM


It would seem, they are all ever greens in this thought...
Really enjoyed this. TD

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8 posted 2003-05-17 10:37 AM


Lovely write!

It makes me wish to hear.

Enjoyed.

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9 posted 2003-05-17 10:49 AM


Sven, this is beautiful. I love to hear
the breeze through the trees.
Hugs,
Ethel

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10 posted 2003-05-19 12:27 PM


thank you all so much for your wonderful replies. . .



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