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nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

0 posted 2003-05-16 12:11 PM

Victoria's Secret

In the closet of my mind
are fantasies of you.
In the closet painted blue
are delicates in view.

Remain in sheer, the luxuries,
this day to wear for him.
But in the meantime hanging there,
my fantasies in trim.

The stockings, black and laced on top
the lingeree to hold.
The gartered memories of once,
whose chance was lost in fold.

The silks and satins, soft to touch
to eyes that see their feel.
The secret's in the closet now
awaiting someone real.

~~*~~

Yesterday, a night complete
with modeling of each.
He was there to watch the moves,
blue eyes within my reach.

To tempt and tease and rearrange
till fade in warmth complete.
An evening filled with loving touch
and words in want, replete.

M

"Love is not blind - It sees more and not less, but because it sees more, it is willing to see less."
(Will Moss)

Midnitesun

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Gaia

1 posted 2003-05-16 12:35 PM

Wonderful poem M!
And was last night a dream or reality? (None of my business

)

nakdthoughts
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2 posted 2003-05-16 12:38 PM

a Lady never tells...but
I am feeling awfully happy today

M

QjQ
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3 posted 2003-05-16 12:41 PM

WOW!!!!!!!!!!! what a write!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

littlewing
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4 posted 2003-05-16 01:12 PM

Maureen:

smiling that you are happy
and smiling at this write
xxoo

passing shadows
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5 posted 2003-05-16 01:19 PM

very hot write, glad you are happy...me too at least for awhile...

nakdthoughts
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6 posted 2003-05-16 01:25 PM

Q, thank you. I don't get "wowed" too often

lw, thanks, yes I am happy. I should have been sooner but you know how that goes...better late than never.
hugssss
M

Dixie, I am contented, something I haven't been for a very long time. And it's always fun modeling my secrets. Hope you can stay happy, too.
hugsss
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-16-2003 01:27 PM).]

Balladeer

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7 posted 2003-05-16 01:59 PM

A mind is a terrible thing to.....get blown apart like you just did mine!

Thanks for the mental visuals!!!

Marge Tindal

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8 posted 2003-05-16 02:04 PM

Wynter~
LOL @ Balladeer .... of COURSE he'd peek in with that title~

Nice write, gal~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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9 posted 2003-05-16 02:08 PM

Very nice -- very nice!

I know for a fact that Victoria can't possibly have a very big secret -- no place to hide it!

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Enchantress
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Canada eh.

10 posted 2003-05-16 02:18 PM

Oh WOW!! Wonderfully sensual write Maureen!!
I love this!..and your new picture!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

nakdthoughts
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11 posted 2003-05-16 02:23 PM

well there you go again, Michael. I don't think I have laughed so much in a very long time...and I am still chuckling here.

I wonder how long it will take me to wear each and every secret...I was afraid they were going to dry rot before I got a chance to again

~smiling~ here
M

Nightshade

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just out of reach

12 posted 2003-05-16 02:25 PM

WhooHooo Maureen!! You go girl !!! Love this write. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

nakdthoughts
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13 posted 2003-05-16 02:29 PM

Margie, I wasn't expecting Balladeer to even catch my title

let alone respond.
I am doing a whole make-over of myself...
new and improved in mind and body.

Hugsss and thanks
M

Ed, another laugh from me. Thank you. Yes there isn't much that hides when wearing Victoria's secrets.

Thank you Nancy, I guess all this strange weather we are having has given me plenty of thinking time. And I felt very good yesterday. It was time to show it.

Thank you Chris. I think I have reached my quota of writes for the day

hugs
M

Aenimal
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14 posted 2003-05-16 03:28 PM

great write and nice to see you smile

serenity blaze
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15 posted 2003-05-16 04:18 PM

smiling at this--

I LOVE being a woman, just because we do get to wear the nices things.

(Fringe--I lose what's left of my mind over fringe!!!)

Enjoyed this--makes me wanna go take one of my bergamot baths...

nakdthoughts
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16 posted 2003-05-16 04:48 PM

A, I tried to smile for the picture but it never turns out when I do, so I am smiling in words today.
Thank you

M

Karen, even if I dress for myself, I can enjoy it. Fringes...hmmm I can't recall if I have anything with fringes...yet.
What kind of bath is that..."bergamot bath"

Well I am off to treat my new self to something with attitude

Thanks all
M

JamesMichael
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17 posted 2003-05-16 05:02 PM

So nice to be reading words of happiness from you...James

nakdthoughts
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18 posted 2003-05-16 05:08 PM

A new motto...

I am to be happy with myself from now on

thank you James for always reading and responding to me.

M

Magnus

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19 posted 2003-05-16 06:59 PM

M. a superbly written piece which flows
like the smoothest cream...

Well done!

vandana

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20 posted 2003-05-16 08:17 PM

enjoyed this

BluesSerenade
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21 posted 2003-05-17 12:49 PM

OOoooooooooooooooo nooooooooooo!
I hope this came true for you~
It's fun to play dress up and show yourself off, just to see if he'll die for ya. lol~

Hugs Maureen~

Opeth
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22 posted 2003-05-17 06:50 AM

"Yesterday, a night complete
with modeling of each.
He was there to watch the moves,
blue eyes within my reach."

~ This was my favorite verse of this surprisingly erotic lil' poem.

Btw...I have blue eyes

Enjoyed!

Larry C

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23 posted 2003-05-17 06:55 PM

SparkleeLipGloss
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24 posted 2003-05-18 11:34 PM

Sensual, sexy, yet not too.. detailed.. lol.. Nice write

~Katie

nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines

25 posted 2003-05-19 02:02 PM

My goodness..I guess my title caught your eyes

Thank you, Barry.I was trying for smooth~

vandana, always a pleasure  to have your eyes read my words. Thank You.

Lori, dress up is a favorite temptation.
Hugsssss...gotta lot of running to do today and tonight...so I will try and catch you late this evening.

Opeth, oh I can  be and write erotic if I so choose

And maybe those eyes were blue for a reason. Thank you Mike,
M

Larry, thanks

I appreciate your kind words, Katie.
Thank you,
Maureen

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