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Professor Gloom
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since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

0 posted 2003-05-16 08:31 AM

Beside the road that winds through hills and wood,
Was a fruit stand that to my eyes looked good,
I parked my car beside the rustic stand,
To see what fresh produce there was at hand.
The spring was almost gone on this warm day
And was chance had brought me along this way.

I heard the roar of a fine tuned engine
Glanced to see a car with lady within.

Stopping at the stand was a dream vision
Sparkling hazel eyes and wavy blonde hair,
Capturing my thoughts she surveyed the stand,
Enthralled by beauty I could only but stare.

She smiled soft at me and to my surprise
Spoke as we looked into each others eyes.

I don’t know what words I managed to say,
Pleasantries as she looked at the stand,
Talking about niceties of the day;
She left in her Vette with apple in hand
I watched after her as she drove away
Lovely dream in the middle of my day.

Gloom

Nan

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Member Seraphic

since 1999-05-20

Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA

1 posted 2003-05-16 08:42 AM

Aha... A bit of "anti-gloom"... Nicely done, PG...

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

2 posted 2003-05-16 09:19 AM

Thank you, Nan,
Perhaps a touch anti,
but he still didn't get the girl.
I'll have to write a follow up poem
and see how it goes.

Gloom

teenpoet
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since 2001-10-17

Posts 280
Michigan

3 posted 2003-05-16 09:46 AM

Well I like it. And I like how it flows together, too. Good job.

I don't know if today is a good day, or if yesterday was, or if tomorrow will be, but I'd like to think so.

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

4 posted 2003-05-16 09:52 AM

Thank you, teenpoet,
Pleased you enjoyed it.

Gloom

Nightshade

Member Patricius

since 2001-08-31

Posts 13962
just out of reach

5 posted 2003-05-16 09:57 AM

Gloom...was it a dream? Or did he go after her? More please. Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....

-Emily Dickinson

Professor Gloom
Member Elite

since 2000-07-23

Posts 3082
of Depression

6 posted 2003-05-16 10:30 AM

Thank you, Nightshade,
With beautiful ladies, at least to me, it’s always a dream,
But I do plan on writing a poem to continue this story,
Glad you enjoyed this part of the story.

Gloom

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