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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York 
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Breath upon nape of my neck speak to me now my name I need to hear from your lips upon mine divine Beside you I lie melded cotton candy fantasy you are my ecstasy next to me Tears fall from two eyes entwined for all time divine [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-16-2003 03:36 PM).] |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
A very nice and touching write  It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Sudhir Iyer Member Ascendant
since 2000-04-26
Posts 6943Mumbai, India : now in Belgium |
Breathing in cotton candy fantasy .... good work this one, my friend... it is a delight to read you... regards, sudhir |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
This is so cool how you write like this...free-falling thoughts... Warm hugs, Linda |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
*sigh* Sue it's just divine! No I'm not going to get all sappy and sad despite the fact I'm blarring Whitney 9 o'clock in the morning! If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. |
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Rick Member Elite
since 2001-06-21
Posts 2903Victoria, Australia |
littlewing; Be the moisture to my lips Be the breath that makes me live Speak the words that follow love From your truth and heart me give Be shy not of this beauty Say not the words untrue For love calls only rarely And for me it called on you Could not help but do this small reply, I enjoyed your work very much, emotion from the heart, the feelings of love. Take care and keep writing. Sincerely Rick |
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whiskey
since 1999-12-28
Posts 1278Australia |
Very nice I like the flow. A lovely piece almost makes the mind wander. Julie |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
one thing I had always wished was to hear my name's whisper brushing against my neck...some day... nice, lw M |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
very sensual write Sue, I sure can relate and miss those moments |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
As usual Sue, reading you is divine. Jason |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
Beautiful...absolutely beautiful! ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Cotton candy gets all sticky and..oh nevermind grin..sexy |
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Bill Charles Member Patricius
since 2000-07-11
Posts 10619highways, & byways, for now |
littlewing - ok lady with a smile, ok... BC |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Dear Sue I much enjoyed your scrumptious poem .... to have our name whispered in love is one of the most delicious moments one can experience. Divine! Love, Margherita |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Glenn: thank you . . . Sudhir . . . breathe . . . hehehe thank you Linda - you know that is exactly what they are too - free falling thoughts - exactly - they do not adhere to any rational forms of poetry . . . thank you Kris: aww you can get sappy - you know that - thank you so much! Rick: goodness what a beautiful response - did I deserve that? Thank you - it really made me smile Julie - lol - wandering minds . . . just what we need in here thank you Maureen - isnt that the loveliest thought though? ahhh - yes . . . it is thank you and hey! it will happen . . . Thanks V - can always count on you Dixie - me too - me too - thank you Jason - you are so sweet - as I feel when reading you - thank you Thank you Nancy - hugs - I needed those Hahahahah Bill - ok . . . . hmmmmm you better be smiling . . . thank you Raph - hehehe but cmon now cotton candy can be fun . . . ohhh ahahahahah I just got it - lmao - Chewy (Empire) is that what you meant? thank you sweety *evil grin* Margherita - God yes isnt it though - like a whisper from Heaven - thank you Thanks guys xxoo [This message has been edited by littlewing (05-16-2003 05:52 PM).] |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
“Tears fall from two eyes entwined for all time divine” A pool formed of our love yours and mine combined littlewing, without you in this garden... Spring, just would have no reason to come... As always, another glimpse, into your beauty... Richy [This message has been edited by Richy (05-17-2003 04:19 AM).] |
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Ericc Member Elite
since 2003-01-31
Posts 4178 |
Wow...this is awe-some. Eric |
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Brad Majors
since 2001-04-03
Posts 2647Georgia |
breathtaking! |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
I really Loved this part: Breath upon nape of my neck speak to me now my name I need to hear from your lips upon mine divine Beside you I lie melded cotton candy fantasy you are my ecstasy next to me Tears fall from two eyes entwined for all time divine You know I loved this Great write & I will never forget the first time I heard my name |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Richy: you humble me with your beautiful words you made me smile tonight with them - what a sweet soul you are , my friend - thank you Ericc - thank you - *smiling* compared to you - ahhh nuthin lol Brad - breathtaking - awesome - thank you dream - lol - you posted the whole thing and I dont think that hearing your name for the first time is something easily forgotten as well thank you - what a sweety you are to me thanks guys xxoo |
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JamesMichael Member Empyrean
since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336Kapolei, Hawaii, USA |
Enjoyed...James |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Yay! Oh Sue, this is beautiful, sweet friend, I long to kiss my dream girls tears away and have her cry golden tears of joy as this thought makes me cry too! (kiss on cheek) You always write such peaceful and light-hearted gems, sweet friend, yay, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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Dark Angel Member Patricius
since 1999-08-04
Posts 10095 |
Divine indeed! enjoyed. Mare |
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brian sites Senior Member
since 2002-06-25
Posts 1475usa |
this is.... "......" yes it is smilin at the smile |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
James - thank you Noah - that time will come for you TY Maree - very cool thanks Bri - keep smilin that smile Thanks guys xxoo |
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inkedgoddess Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-19
Posts 7392Ohio |
cotton candy, rainbows, if only they could not melt before your eyes........ |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Michele: I know - like the snow . . . xxoo |
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