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BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside

0 posted 2003-05-16 01:24 AM



You are my fancy dancer
lover of my life
the hummer of my heart
who handles me with care.

A delicate spin through gentle cycles
filled with steaming heat
extra capfuls soften me
dripping down to dry.

Blowing through a steady vent
hot water runs into my blush
a rush beneath my skirt
lifting up the sky to fly.

Flirting with my petticoats
a rumble tumble in the breeze
turning somersaults around  
leaves a dampness in between.

Hung loosely in my tangle
waving through cotton fields
blows a steady quiet sound  
folded neatly in your hold.

Lying beneath layers
you are the static cling
the warm feel of my lusting
dressng up my sun days

fit to be tied by night~

© Copyright 2003 BluesSerenade - All Rights Reserved
Dark Angel
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1 posted 2003-05-16 01:28 AM


Flirting with my petticoats
a rumble tumble in the breeze
turning somersaults around  
leaves a dampness in between.


Veerrrrrrrryyyyyyy goooooood! Love the images here m'dear

Maree.


Larry C
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2 posted 2003-05-16 01:28 AM


Bluesie,
==========================
Lying beneath layers
you are the static cling
the warm feel of my lusting
dressng up my sun days

fit to be tied by night~
==========================

Awww...you do set that romantic mood that makes me into a puddle. What more could I ask for?

If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again.

wranx
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3 posted 2003-05-16 01:29 AM


Damned interesting laundry days you have!

Wow!

Ratleader
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4 posted 2003-05-16 01:35 AM


You do this kind better than anybody! Bravo!

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Richy
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5 posted 2003-05-16 01:44 AM




..... cough....  .... (clearing throat sound) .... sorry... trying to catch my breath... ackhh!

BluesSerenade, your poem made me feel like a young boy, sneaking into his first R rated movie...

My cheeks are all flushed!

If I ever read a more sensual poem before...

It’s just been replaced, by this one...

You have a wonderful talent...

Any guy who doesn’t save this one, had better check his pulse!


Thanks BluesSerenade...


Richy



Ivy Rose
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6 posted 2003-05-16 03:39 AM


Blues Serenade...A very steamy, hot poem; but done with such finesse that you don't realize quite what you're reading. You are truly a gifted writer. ***Ivy Rose
littlewing
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7 posted 2003-05-16 06:23 AM


Damn Bluesy
*smiling*

this is sooo awesome . . .

laundry will never be quite the same for me after this . . . lol

tweets
xxoo

nakdthoughts
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8 posted 2003-05-16 10:19 AM


as I was reading I almost thought it would have to be moved to "adult", but you pulled it off  
Good writing
hugs
M

[This message has been edited by nakdthoughts (05-16-2003 10:19 AM).]

ThisDiamond
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9 posted 2003-05-16 10:21 AM


Had to say...I so enjoyed this write.
There is plenty to be said for static cling...
EXCELLENT! TD

Earth Angel
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10 posted 2003-05-16 12:09 PM


I'm saving this for sure! IWIHWT !!! ...there!--securely bedded down in my secret place of special somethin's!

May your day be full joy!
Linda


icebox
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11 posted 2003-05-16 12:29 PM


You made my heart soar like a hawk.  Thank you for sharing this.
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12 posted 2003-05-16 12:44 PM


BluesSerenade~

'Hung loosely in my tangle
waving through cotton fields
blows a steady quiet sound  
folded neatly in your hold.'


EXQUISITELY done~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
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Midnitesun
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13 posted 2003-05-16 12:48 PM


outstanding! so playful!
Jason Lyle
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With my darkling
14 posted 2003-05-16 01:52 PM


Wishing I was a petticoat , love this.

Jason

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just out of reach
15 posted 2003-05-16 02:27 PM


Well now Bluesygirl....this is going directly into my library! Wow. hugs, Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

Enchantress
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16 posted 2003-05-16 02:31 PM


OOOH Lori!!
Softly sensual...very much enjoyed..
~Smiles & Hugs~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Bill Charles
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highways, & byways, for now
17 posted 2003-05-16 04:18 PM


BluesSerenade - oh my, blushing in the tub...

BC

BluesSerenade
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By the Seaside
18 posted 2003-05-16 10:08 PM


Many thanks to each and every one of you.
I wasn't sure if I could pull this off,
I guess it's a  wash when it's worded right.  

Yep, my muse is back, fancy that!
Thank you again for taking the time.


passing shadows
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displaced
19 posted 2003-05-17 06:11 AM


awesome!
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