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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown 
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~ By Sue ~ I look way up into the sky And, I can't help but wonder why You were there for a little while Then you took away all the smiles A love that was there just for you Until the day you said we were through The pain I stuffed deep down inside And all of the tears I did hide Together I thought we would be Until the end of time, you see I really believed that you cared But, my feelings you did not spare Today I sit inside my house And, I am glad I have no spouse 5-14-03 |
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Larry C
since 2001-09-10
Posts 10286United States |
Sue, Life indeed can be harsh. I admire your courage.  If tears could build a stairway and memories a lane, I'd walk right up to heaven and bring you home again. |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
expressing yourself can be good!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
Sad...but I think I heard a sigh of relief in this one too. |
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Ratleader
since 2003-01-23
Posts 7026Visiting Earth on a Guest Pass |
Yep, there's pain, and then there's glad pain that you don't mind so much after all.... ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸¸¸ºº> ~~(¸¸ ¸¸ºº> ~~~(¸¸ER¸¸ºº> |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
Good Morning, Sue. Hope you are doing fine. hugsss M |
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ThisDiamond Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353Michigan, USA |
Sounds like a good place... Passing the coffee...and a smile. ThisDiamond |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Loved the last line!!! That's the spirit! I was getting a little bit worried about your state of mind when I began reading this great poem!  Loving hugs, Linda You go girl! |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
SweetSuzieQuesie~ This is a wonderful format for your emote~ All my e-mails were being returned with a 'mailbox full' at this time from your other address~ I just added this one to my book *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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