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vandana
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0 posted 2003-05-15 04:50 PM


You say love is too much
You say you know me
That well
But I can tell
You don't know me
If you knew me
you wouldn't tell me lies
No
My love
You don't know me
I can tell It
From your eyes
you weren't sure of
what I was saying It to you
You are not sure of
What we have been through
You say you love me
But It seems
Our love Is falling apart
It Is falling apart
Because you don't know me
If you knew me
you would have loved me
All the time
When we meet
everytime
But It seems
you don't know me
No
my love
you don't know me
At all

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1 posted 2003-05-15 04:55 PM


And that makes it harder to stay in love, when your partner is unable/unwilling to get to know you in depth.
Peace.

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2 posted 2003-05-15 04:55 PM




(big hugggsssssss) Oh Vandana, I'm glad this is just a re-post from 1999, sweet friend, you are deserving of the truth always and I think all lying partners should be ashamed and be punished with the heartache of the ricocheting lies and their consequences! (sigh) This is heartfelt, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

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3 posted 2003-05-15 05:24 PM


No, he doesn't appear to know you, for to know you, is to love you--and to love you well...

Warm hugs,
Linda

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4 posted 2003-05-15 06:52 PM




Vandana,

You brought the feelings of hurt and sadness through very well in this.

Hugs, Pat


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5 posted 2003-05-15 06:54 PM


Very nicely written Vandana!
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

Nan
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6 posted 2003-05-15 09:54 PM


There's always so much to learn about each other, isn't there? - Nicely expressed, vandana..
QjQ
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7 posted 2003-05-15 10:17 PM


one neva knows!!!  i liked this

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

passing shadows
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8 posted 2003-05-16 04:52 AM


liked this vandana...a good write
Sudhir Iyer
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9 posted 2003-05-16 04:57 AM


nice... nice...


regards
sudhir

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