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ThisDiamond
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0 posted 2003-05-15 03:26 PM


The heel not too high
A pump to keep things straight
In bow above to tie
May slip the hands of fate

And take me yellow road
Crowned well the emerald view
But clicked in smile bestowed
These steps to follow through

The shimmer ruby red
In ease of rounded toe
The sharper knows to dread
Around each corner slow

And here anticipate
The positive conclude
As dreams will never wait
In slippers to be shoed

Copyright Kkh 5/15/03


© Copyright 2003 Kathleen Harris - All Rights Reserved
Magnus
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1 posted 2003-05-15 03:33 PM


no, they surely will not,  ehhh?  Nice job
Cinderella, Alice and a host of others...  love
the rhyme and flow...and of course...you always
place within a message for us to enjoy..

[This message has been edited by Magnus (05-15-2003 05:16 PM).]

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2 posted 2003-05-15 04:16 PM


Loving this Kathleen!
Makes me want to click my heels three times.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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3 posted 2003-05-15 04:21 PM


What a fun read!

clicking red heels in time with the rhythm of this post

Richy
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4 posted 2003-05-15 04:57 PM




There is, no place like “this” home!

TD, say hi to Toto too, for us...

Magical!


Richy


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5 posted 2003-05-15 05:22 PM


May I join you?--Grab hold of my wing..."We're off to see the wizard, the wonderful wizard of Oz!"...

Enjoyed the inherent message as well.

Warm hugs,
Linda

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6 posted 2003-05-15 06:55 PM


This is awesome!! Enjoyed. Chris

"Hope" is the thing with feathers-
that perches in the soul....
                  
                       -Emily Dickinson

regards2you
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7 posted 2003-05-15 06:56 PM




Kathleen,

Smiles and grins...

Enjoyed greatly...

Hugs, Pat  


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8 posted 2003-05-15 07:38 PM



I truly don't think
Dorothy ever realized
just what she wore!

Wow!

Wonderful!

Mistletoe Angel
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9 posted 2003-05-15 09:13 PM




(sigh) Think of all the Munchkins you know and let them lead you to your own Emerald City, or maybe Sapphire City in your vision! (kiss on cheek) This is beautifully surreal, sweet friend, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Kathleen, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

nakdthoughts
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10 posted 2003-05-15 09:20 PM


you brought me a smile of words~
Thanks
M

littlewing
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11 posted 2003-05-16 06:33 AM


Kathleen:

maybe it is me - but no - dreams are
something you MAKE happen . . .

nice write
xxoo
  

vandana
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12 posted 2003-05-16 09:33 AM


enjoyed
Ceinwyn
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13 posted 2003-05-16 10:10 AM


sweet..enjoyed

If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

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14 posted 2003-05-16 01:59 PM


ThisDiamond~

Oh yes, kick up your heels and dream big~


A lovely read~
*Huglets*
~*Marge*~

~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~
noles1@totcon.com

Magnus
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15 posted 2003-05-16 09:58 PM


Oh yeah,  I think I forgot one name...
perhaps "Dorothy"??

the more I read this, duhhhh...the more I
learn..

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16 posted 2003-05-16 10:10 PM


Kathleen, this is so beautiful.....
especially this part...

And here anticipate
The positive conclude
As dreams will never wait
In slippers to be shoed


Hugs,
Ethel

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