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Ceinwyn
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since 2000-07-09
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0 posted 2003-05-15 02:46 PM


Disclosure: No it's nothing sexual

This hunger pain
Jolting through my very soul
When I stare into vast space
Licking my lips
When I imagine your face
I would push everyone
And everything aside
Just to surrender
To only you
To the submissiveness
I feel deep within my body
Whenever you are near
I'm starving
For your attention
I've been living for love too long
Fueled by your unknown aura
Lurking behind closed doors
I've been waiting for you
To show yourself
Waiting for you to hold me down
To this cold cruel world
You've teased me
For the past thousand lifetimes
I don't know how much longer
I can hold out
This fire burning out of control
When I'm always dreaming of you
My tormentor, My Angel, My Knight in Shining Armour...



If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried.

[This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-15-2003 02:50 PM).]

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Midnitesun
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Gaia
1 posted 2003-05-15 04:08 PM


Do you really think anyone bought that disclaimer?
An enjoyable read!

Aenimal
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since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350
the ass-end of space
2 posted 2003-05-15 10:46 PM


Wendy's has the lat night window..um i dunno what to say but great write..
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
3 posted 2003-05-16 06:17 AM


Kacy - nope . . .

Raphael!  

Kris - is a beautiful write indeed
xxoo

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