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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space 
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I've languished too long in the depths of self weary of the darkness Will the scales be kind to one who tried to walk a line of balance and truths? I know not the answer for it lies in the future and I lie in the now I know the wisdom of the encircled star Above is as below yet I am still tethered to lies of the kingdom Knowledge of the paths and walking them are not the same I know that I must embrace this wisdom To reach for the crown or wither away |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
"The World" awaits you Raphael...  |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Hope so K, knew you'd appreciate this..d'ya like the structure? |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Your structure is ALWAYS solid Raph, as is your integrity of quest, O tarnished Knight. I curtsey. grin... |
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Ceinwyn Member Elite
since 2000-07-09
Posts 2175VA |
btw I'm not too much Raph I only cost 50 cents but thats between you and me  hey hrm...I don't know what to say without freaking you out..*goes back to her groundhog hole* but M'dear you're just shining here even tho your armour is tarnished If at first you don't succeed destroy all the evidence that you tried. [This message has been edited by Ceinwyn (05-15-2003 03:02 PM).] |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Thank you my dear lady K's I thought I was being clever with the 3 7 12 Kris i gotta say you make me smile |
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littlewing Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655New York |
Hey Raph: I left my response elsewhere . . . want to discuss this one k? amazing writing btw xxoo |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
awesome write! |
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nakdthoughts Member Laureate
since 2000-10-29
Posts 19200Between the Lines |
I don't know about your structure, but I know when a poem reaches and touches me. *s M |
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Enchantress Member Empyrean
since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113Canada eh. |
This 'touches'...a place deep within. ~Hugs~ ~Somewhere in my heart I'm always |
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Jason Lyle Senior Member
since 2003-02-07
Posts 1438With my darkling |
Every time I read you Raph, you force a hard look inside.Your search for answers and solid ground on these pages, has aided my own.Thank you. Jason |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
Sue a'ight thanks Dixie nakd thanks means alot that it touches others as well Nancy thanks and glad it does Jason glad to help wish I had better answers..or any really ..grin |
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serenity blaze Member Empyrean
since 2000-02-02
Posts 27738 |
Yep...that got me Raph... forgive me as I am a big befuddled of late. But? You DO know I will ask you to post this in The Mystic Muse? (if ya haven't already) sigh. |
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Margherita Member Seraphic
since 2003-02-08
Posts 22236Eternity |
Beautiful Raffaele. Your heart is showing you the path that leads to truth .... Come sopra, così sotto. Si. Abbracci. Margherita  |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed |
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Aenimal Member Rara Avis
since 2002-11-18
Posts 7350the ass-end of space |
K done and done but explaining it will take awhile Margherita se un angelo, sempre dice sti belli cosi..makes me smile and yes i realize i can't write Italian for s*** lol thanks vandana |
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