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Yogi
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since 2001-11-05
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0 posted 2003-05-15 09:41 AM


I sit alone alongside a gentle flowing stream
So tranquil and silent it overwhelms me
Not a breath of wind nor birds singing
Tears begin falling so tenderly down my face
Hurting, despair, forever in pain
Wish the rains would fall to hide my torment
To wash away the tears I cry for a my first lost love
I just gaze into the stream lost in contemplation
Not seeing my reflection hurting back with me
A solitary tear falls silent to the stream below
Turning into a apparition of my lost love standing by my side
I turn, to see but nothing just trees and couples walking by
They glance at me and notice the tears falling down my face
I slowly turn back to stare into space once more
Alone and lost evermore in the hurt of lost love


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Pilgrimage
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since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
1 posted 2003-05-15 10:03 AM


Yogi, this is so sad. I'm sorry for anyone in the throes of such despair. Hopefully, it won't last long, and recovery will be swift.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

El_Campeador
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since 2003-01-29
Posts 761
Ohio, USA
2 posted 2003-05-15 02:52 PM


Look to the sunrise and see the promise of a rising sun. In every life there are periods of darkness, but the sun always rises again, without fail.

“We are all travelers in the wilderness of this world, and the best that we can find in our travels is an honest friend.” –Robert Louis Stevenson

Enchantress
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since 2001-08-14
Posts 35113
Canada eh.
3 posted 2003-05-15 02:54 PM


Very nicely written and even though sad much enjoyed.
~Smiles & Hugs, Nancy~

~Somewhere in my heart I'm always
dancing with you in the summer rain~

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