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Kellie_Cantrell
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0 posted 05-15-2003 02:41 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to Submit your Poem to Passions  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

                        A
                  cry          holding
               me                       Tight
            letting                          me
           hide           in the            twilight
         and that I cry deeply now, as sorrow
       cuts in, why now, why me? Do you love me?
      Time will only let us know, will you be here
       at the end? or will I have to look again,
         and see right through you and save
             myself from these tears that,
                 fall from my eye.
  

        
Love Always,
    

[This message has been edited by Kellie_Cantrell (05-15-2003 02:42 AM).]

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Local Parasite
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1 posted 05-15-2003 09:17 AM       View Profile for Local Parasite   Email Local Parasite   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems   Click to visit Local Parasite's Home Page   View IP for Local Parasite

Oh cool... "a cry holding me."  I LOVE the irony of those opening few words.  Very, very creative.

Concrete poetry is hard to lay out, but you've done an alright job... I like your choice of words, and the style in which you wrote this...  you've done a nice job of describing that tear and all that it entails before it strikes the ground.

Nice work, Kellie.  

Parasite

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~Percy Bysshe Shelley

Margherita
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Eternity


2 posted 05-16-2003 06:17 PM       View Profile for Margherita   Email Margherita   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Margherita

Very nice. Twilight IS the moment when tears flow easily.
Love, Margherita
nakdthoughts
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Between the Lines


3 posted 05-16-2003 06:46 PM       View Profile for nakdthoughts   Email nakdthoughts   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for nakdthoughts

I agree with LP.
I enjoyed your words
and the style, Kellie.

Nicely done.
M
Kellie_Cantrell
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4 posted 07-13-2003 03:45 AM       View Profile for Kellie_Cantrell   Email Kellie_Cantrell   Edit/Delete Message      Find Poems  View IP for Kellie_Cantrell

Thank You all, it amazes me how the mind works and how words just flow from the brain and show exact emotion so well!

                   Love,
             xXx~*KELLIE*~xXx
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http://www.freewebs.com/poettree/

 
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