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cinnamongirl
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since 2003-02-02

Posts 217

0 posted 2003-05-14 09:55 PM

Good morning, my love...
I awake with your name
Dancing upon my lips.
I wonder where you are
Now that your spirit has left me
And returned home.
You touched me throughout the night
Held me close to you, let me
Breathe in your heavenly scent.
It was magical, my love... I
Never wanted to rise, knowing that
You would once again leave me
For reality.
My love, sleep has never been
So beautiful...

Martie

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1 posted 2003-05-14 10:01 PM

cinnamongirl.......lovely, etherial quality to this spirit filled love poem. Enjoyed!

Ericc
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since 2003-01-31

Posts 4178

2 posted 2003-05-14 10:05 PM

Very lovely.
Love,
Eric

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08

Posts 22236
Eternity

3 posted 2003-05-16 06:15 PM

Wonderful when sleep holds such sweetness ...
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

carol
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since 2003-01-25

Posts 624
Florida USA

4 posted 2003-05-16 10:55 PM

nice write I loved it

Real friends celebrate in who we are and have faith in all that we can become
Lots of Love
Rita

ThisDiamond
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since 2002-02-22

Posts 9353
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5 posted 2003-05-16 10:59 PM

Some very lovely lines here.

I awake with your name dancing on my lips...
My favorite. TD

icebox
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since 2003-05-03

Posts 4383
in the shadows

6 posted 2003-05-16 11:02 PM

Naked souls touching
Chains are smoke in cleansing wind
Souls touched touch again.

Thank you for sharing your poem. I enjoyed it.

teledon
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since 2003-03-30

Posts 51
Florida USA

7 posted 2003-05-17 01:10 AM

imaginative and sweet .. paticularly
like "your name dancing on my lips"

passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26

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displaced

8 posted 2003-05-17 06:01 AM

yes, beautiful!

Nan

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9 posted 2003-05-17 07:08 AM

This has a lovely ethereal quality - Nicely done, cg..

Opeth
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since 2001-12-13

Posts 1543
The Ravines

10 posted 2003-05-17 07:26 AM

"I wonder where you are
Now that your spirit has left me
And returned home."

~ Equating the actual "being" with one's love as a spiritual experience is captured within this sentence.

Enjoyed!

vandana

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11 posted 2003-05-17 09:29 AM

enjoyed

Ratleader

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12 posted 2003-05-17 09:35 AM

Oh, do I not know exactly what you mean....

So many solid new poets coming to this group, and I think I just added one to my must-read list.

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