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vandana
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0 posted 2003-05-14 06:48 PM



I whisper your name
In my sleep
I watch you running
Into my arm
The night is cold and dark
I sit by the window
Watch the stars go by
I can hear your voice
In my heart
Because I love you so
I will be awake
through night
I'll be dreaming
Untill the morning comes
And wait for your love
arrives to me
Want you to know
Iam waiting
for the right time
To hold you tight
I close my ears
As I listen to
the song we used to sing
I cry
Because I can't bear
to hear it
And you are not here
with me
Because I love you
very much
I love you
from my heart
And I promise
I will love you
Till the end of time
That Is why
I love you so much
No matter what

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QjQ
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1 posted 2003-05-14 06:52 PM


very romantic and nice!!

It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you.

Sunshine
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2 posted 2003-05-14 07:27 PM


No matter what!
When it's right
and you know it
and he knows it...
Then the world smiles...

Mistletoe Angel
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3 posted 2003-05-14 07:33 PM




(sigh) Oh Vandana, this is lovely, sweet friend, this made me smile as all your gorgeous words do, yay, so happy you re-posted this and congratulations on the happiness you are sharing with Bryce, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Vandana, thank you for sharing!



May love and light always shine upon you!

Love,
Noah Eaton

Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story

***Shakira***

Alan
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since 2000-09-12
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4 posted 2003-05-14 08:02 PM


I answer your call
as I watch you sleep
Come away from the window
Let me wrap you in my arms
Let the heat of our love
Warm your body.

Vandana... you have written a fabulous poem.I hope you don't get upset by my respone to it.
alan

Sven
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5 posted 2003-05-15 12:25 PM


unconditional. . .that's the only way. . .

well done my friend. . .

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To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world.

littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
6 posted 2003-05-16 05:23 AM


V:

when you talk about the song
hearing it . . .  ohh mann
I know this and this hurts
nice writing xxoo

[This message has been edited by littlewing (05-16-2003 05:53 PM).]

Margherita
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since 2003-02-08
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7 posted 2003-05-16 05:31 PM


Softly melancholic ...."watching the stars go by" waiting for the beloved.
Beautiful!
Love, Margherita

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