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Amature2
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since 2001-01-08
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0 posted 2003-05-14 10:19 AM



Missing You

My life feels so empty
I don’t know what to do
When you are not near me
When I’m not holding you

I yearn to feel your heat rise
To touch your silky hair
To look into your blue eyes
And smell you in the air

I dream of taking a long walk
Under a canopy of trees
Or just sit and talk
Surrounded by a cool sea breeze

For now I will play solitaire
With your picture on my mind
Imagine what today you will wear
And wonder why time is so unkind

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Cpat Hair
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Member Patricius
since 2001-06-05
Posts 11793

1 posted 2003-05-14 10:23 AM


is hard to be away from those we care about...

nicely done


Pilgrimage
Member Elite
since 2001-12-04
Posts 3945
Texas, USA
2 posted 2003-05-14 12:13 PM


Sometimes separation makes for good poetry. I enjoyed this one.

Nan (Pilgrim variety)

ThisDiamond
Member Rara Avis
since 2002-02-22
Posts 9353
Michigan, USA
3 posted 2003-05-14 12:17 PM


You wrote this very well.
There is a purposeful conclusion to this yearning...we don't always see it right away... TD

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