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The Lonely Stranger
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since 1999-06-18
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Upstate, NY, USA

0 posted 2003-05-13 07:59 PM


On moonlit hill I contemplate,
The whimsy of the lady, Fate

In her wind, I twist, I flail
I flutter like an unbound sail

On moonlit hill I sit with stars
I plead they tell me where you are.

They do not speak, they do not tell
They leave me to my mortal Hell

On moonlit hill I sit alone
Awaiting light to lead me home.

I miss your look, I miss your touch
I guess I loved you far too much

On moonlit hill is where I'll be
If one day you search for me

(I know ... I know ... It's a repost. But who knows if this were a movie, maybe she'd see it)


... There is no normal life Wyatt, just life ... so live!

© Copyright 2003 Gerald H. Monroe - All Rights Reserved
passing shadows
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since 1999-08-26
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1 posted 2003-05-14 02:54 AM


glad you reposted, I missed it the first time
Frank Tymon
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since 2003-05-11
Posts 27
California, USA
2 posted 2003-05-15 01:38 AM


The title attracted my attention.
And I'm glad it did.
The words are good, and as I read it, there is a beat to the lines.
Nice.

Frank Tymon
PASSION, Read free; pay if you like.
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