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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
Posts 87


0 posted 2003-05-13 07:43 PM


“If Ever You Fall”
to: you

I wish there was
something I could say
to make everything
all right
I wish I could do
so much more
to see you smile
make you laugh
how do you stand
when everything falls
how do you
wake up each day
see the light at the end
of the deep dark tunnel
keep your head above water
while everyone drowns
you are so brave
and strong
I know you don’t
want my pity
my hugs
but still I’m sorry
have nothing to say
silence speaks volumes
tears flood the halls
but here is my hand
if ever you need it
if ever you fall

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

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littlewing
Member Rara Avis
since 2003-03-02
Posts 9655
New York
1 posted 2003-05-14 02:18 AM


You know Jess - this is beautiful
reminds a lot of being online because
a lot of times there is nothing but words
even though those words mean SOOOO much
many times you just can quell that pain

is lovely and you are quite compassionate
xxoo  

passing shadows
Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577
displaced
2 posted 2003-05-14 03:26 AM


an awesome write, very comforting
JamesMichael
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since 1999-11-16
Posts 33336
Kapolei, Hawaii, USA
3 posted 2003-05-14 05:47 AM


A fantastic formation of words...James
Nan
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since 1999-05-20
Posts 21191
Cape Cod Massachusetts USA
4 posted 2003-05-14 08:53 PM


This is a wonderfully heartfelt piece, ts...
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