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Beyond The Window Frame
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Beyond The Window Frame |
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Suetang Member Ascendant
since 2001-03-07
Posts 5187Melbourne, Australia 
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 Beyond the ivy covered window There is a glow of candlelight She sprays his favourite perfume While she anticipates the night Pink and red geraniums Adorn the window frame There are footsteps on the path And she hears him call her name She has waited for this moment But now she waits no more She rushes to his arms As he throws open the door He pours the fine red wine From the valley in the east Such a night will promise passion Upon their love they will feast He is drawn towards her face Such beauty beyond compare Not a single word is spoken And he cannot help but stare Their faces glow in profile By the flickering candlelight And as love takes the reigns Their hearts take wing in flight * * * "I only wish to be the fountain of love from which you drink, every drop promising eternal passion" * * * |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
very nice write!!! It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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Magnus
since 2001-10-10
Posts 14135South Carolina, USA |
Well Sue T. you continue to grow and your writing grows as well...nicely done... |
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dreambuilder Member
since 2003-03-23
Posts 319caddyshack |
wow awesome visual I long for that kind of romance I have the candles & the wine waiting - lol I loved this one - look forward to more |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
You are one of Pip's finest writers of romance! Such a treat to read--and swooon over!  Here's to Love & Romance! Linda |
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SmartChick Member Rara Avis
since 2001-09-23
Posts 7081On A Journey To The Unknown |
Just beautiful Sue. |
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NewEnglandlazurlu Member Rara Avis
since 2002-01-04
Posts 7470A Mountain Paradise |
Hi Sue, I love the way you incorporated the objects from the picture, candle, flowers, etc., into the poem. It all felt so real, as if I was watching him walk up the path. Great job. No one does romance like you. Huggles, Marti Few are those who see with their own eyes and feel with their own hearts. A.Einstein |
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Marge Tindal
since 1999-11-06
Posts 42384Florida's Foreverly Shores |
OhSueTang~ This is BEAUTIMOUS !!!!!!!! *Huglets* ~*Marge*~ ~*The pen of the poet never runs out of ink, as long as we breathe.*~ |
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Trillium
since 2001-03-09
Posts 12098Idaho, USA |
Sue: Beautiful and romantic! Betty Lou Hebert |
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Corinne Member Ascendant
since 1999-10-28
Posts 5167state of confusion |
So romantic, thanks for taking me away, away, away! Cor |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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Mistletoe Angel
since 2000-12-17
Posts 32816Portland, Oregon |
 (smiles) Awwwwwwwwww, I love this, sweet friend, the ivy would make a perfect setting for any beautiful romantic rendezvous, I would love to share a special date with my dream girl in a place like that! (kiss on cheek) Yay, this all makes such a gorgeous picture frame of a love memory ever so heavenly, we all love you so much! You have such a beautiful heart, sweet Sue, thank you for sharing!  May love and light always shine upon you! Love, Noah Eaton Underneath your clothes, there's an endless story |
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