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tornskirt
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since 2003-03-30
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0 posted 2003-05-13 04:11 PM


lovin' you
like i loved him
he was my first true love
i'll always love him
as i'll always love you
but i'll never get the chance
never get the chance
to show either of you
would you ever give me the chance?
when we grow up and apart
if you're not married
by you're 28th year
would you marry me
not really kidding
not totally serious
i lvoe you as a friend
i like you as more
perhaps i learn
to love you like him
but i'll never get the chance
never get the chance
never get the chance

never leave the light on if you don't want to be found

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Brad Majors
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1 posted 2003-05-13 05:06 PM


I like it
littlewing
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since 2003-03-02
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2 posted 2003-05-14 02:15 AM


Jess:

aghhhhhhhhh I know this . . .
sometimes never getting the chance
is more painful than getting the chance
and not succeeding . . .
nice write
xxoo

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