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kaile
since 2000-02-06
Posts 5146singapore 
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Today, your existance justified by the number of barricades you painted They glisten under the sun, past scratches concealed, waiting to start afresh Do you ask for the same thing, I wonder as joggers run past in tune to ear-blasting music, throwing you a cursory glance as you converse with your fellow worker in a secret language, your hands never stopping Later, after a short nap taken because there wasn't anything else to do, I sat in front of the TV, depleting a cup of whipped potato without really tasting while I wasted some life half-thinking how and what to make of it |
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Richy Member Elite
since 2003-05-03
Posts 3050 |
Kaile, I really liked the style in which you wrote this... And the message as well... Very nicely done! Richy |
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passing shadows Member Empyrean
since 1999-08-26
Posts 45577displaced |
sounds like something i could have written....very good write |
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Justbleu Member Elite
since 1999-08-31
Posts 3329Oregon, Originally From Alaska :) |
Kinda sad.... Enjoyed!!! Bridgette  "Somewhere, somehow, it should be possible to touch someone and never let go again. To hold someone, not for a moment but forever." Unknown |
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garysgirl 
since 2002-09-29
Posts 19237Florida, USA |
Do you ask for the same thing, I wonder as joggers run past in tune to ear-blasting music, throwing you a cursory glance as you converse with your fellow worker in a secret language, your hands never stopping Kaile, I imagine that a lot of people feel this exact way when they go to their jobs every day....they just don't know how to express it as well as you did. You do have a way with words. Very good.  Hugs, Ethel |
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Mon Cherie
since 2001-10-31
Posts 922Land of Never-ending Summers |
Wow, Kaile... That's cool... I guess you've found a meaningful way to while away your spare time.  _,,,^.^,,,_ |
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Midnitesun
since 2001-05-18
Posts 28647Gaia |
I always enjoy the view in your microscope, the one positioned under the close-up lens. many hurdles to paint, and you paint them well |
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Earth Angel Member Empyrean
since 2002-08-27
Posts 40215Realms of Light |
Well, for starters, you could put salt, pepper and real butter on the potatoes to make them taste delicious!  Healing hugs, Linda |
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Sven
since 1999-11-23
Posts 14937East Lansing, MI USA |
going for the post-modern are we kaile??  of course, you do it with your own style and thought. . . great work. . . ------------------------------------------------------------------ To the world, you may only be one person. But to one person, you may be the world. |
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Joannak Member
since 2000-03-11
Posts 121Indiana, USA |
kaile, Another one to place in my library for future pleasure. I so enjoy reading your work, you make me look at the world through different eyes. Joanna What better way to become immortal than to wake up each day and write? Ray Bradbury |
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QjQ Member Elite
since 2003-04-18
Posts 3756U.S.A. |
a very nice write, i enjoyied reading It matters not how you answer, It matters only that i hear you. |
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vandana
since 1999-10-22
Posts 10463USA |
enjoyed  |
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